Bait Bus - Second Seduction

Nov 02, 2010 18:27

Title: Bait Bus - Second Seduction
Pairing: YooSu
Rating: NC-17
Length: Twoshot

Summary: Where unsuspecting men are lured into a van by a beautiful girl, only to be offered an interesting opportunity with an even more beautiful boy…

Disclaimery A/N: This is based off the porn site "Bait Bus". I admit, I stole their idea and used it for my own ( Read more... )

pairing: yoosu, type: au, starring: dbsk, title: bait bus, rating: nc-17, status: complete, genre: smut, length: twoshot, *fic

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peachinlabel November 2 2010, 14:59:26 UTC
Being the perv that I am, I enjoyed reading this so soo much 8Q______ It was really detailed, hot, sexy and I'm on the verge of nosebleeding here. Unff~ Voyeurism can be such a turn on^^

I like how Junsu turned all wanton and writhing when he had his first taste of pleasure. Yum. And Yoochun being so gentlemanly with him is just aww~

Virgin Junsu definitely has his own charm to it. 8'DD Lucky him, getting a hot, sexy guy during his first time<3 Wayy to go, Chunface.

So this whole Bait Bus thing really exist? XDD

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bexy31 November 2 2010, 15:08:56 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!! ^_^ And aren't we all pervs, really~? XD *hands you tissues just in case you do end up nosebleeding*

Yoochun is lovely ^_^ And I seriously can't resist slutty!Su O.O He makes me want to write more~

Yup yup, Bait Bus is a real thing. If you type it into Google it's the first thing to come up. Beware though - penises abound! And obviously they're not as hot as DBSK :( ...The guys, not the penises ^_^"
It really does seem kinda mean, but if the guys are stupid enough to do it...

Thanks so much for commenting!! ^w^

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peachinlabel November 2 2010, 15:22:58 UTC
/grabs tissues and wipes said nosebleed. I can never stop this horniness in meh DX

Ooh, then you should write moarr then~ >8DD /stalks. Your writing is really good<3

LMAO. Spreading the love for yaoi eh? I approve >DD I haven't been to the site, but I take it that only Japan would come up with something crazy and daring like this XDD But I shudder and fear; I've had my fair share of unsexy pron ;A; /rolls away.
Oh well. Men are stupid and horny, nuff said 8DD

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bexy31 November 2 2010, 15:38:26 UTC
Oh my God I love your Chomping!Junsu icon XD Bless him~

I shall indeed do more! ^_^ There shall be a sequel to both the Yunjae and the Yoosu :) All because I want more slutty!Su, and doing it as a sequel fits well~

Actually it's American O.O I wonder what a Japanese version would be like... Because it's American they say "dude" and stuff a lot and I had to try really hard not to make Changmin say that >.< He woulda sounded a little funny, lol.

Pr0n can be so scary T____T Especially when you're not expecting it and then BOOM it's there. Then I scream and run away close the browser.

This is true. And the hornier they get, the stupider they get. Silly silly men...

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ting5 November 2 2010, 15:57:42 UTC
No, no who would mind slutty!Su?!

I have an inkling feeling Yoochun knew what was going on but still at the end when he said it just makes you grin from ear to ear, imagine how Su will feel like :DD

And sequel!! Yayy for that :)

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bexy31 November 2 2010, 16:10:38 UTC
Ah, I'm glad it made you smile!! ^_^ I hope the sequel will too :D

Thanks for commenting~ :D

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ting5 November 2 2010, 22:01:35 UTC
Will be waiting ^_~

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aww,,that's hott~~ reny_wen November 2 2010, 16:50:02 UTC
thank god,,its chunnie who take susu's virginity^^
*i know thats obvious but sexy guy??*
chunnie such a cute guy,,he just can't resist susu's duck butt..>_<
aww,,i'm soo in love with this story~~
you're soo great..
thank you for this lovely story^////^

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Re: aww,,that's hott~~ bexy31 November 2 2010, 23:56:41 UTC
How could anyone resist Su's butt? XD

I'm glad you like it!! :D Thank you... ^////^

Also, thank you muchly for reading and commenting! :D

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yseia November 2 2010, 17:06:22 UTC
oooooooohhhh............ moar!!! ahahaha, this is good!

smutty yet sweet! can't wait for the next parts!!! =p

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bexy31 November 2 2010, 23:57:42 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D The next parts may be a while coming sorry >.< I'll try to get them done soon though :)

Thanks for commenting! ^_^

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one_nee November 2 2010, 18:11:15 UTC
wow, i read both parts. i heard about bait bus before, but i never watched it.
but u really make the yunjae n yoosu version interesting. and yep, i would love to read jae's point of view =)

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bexy31 November 2 2010, 23:58:42 UTC
It's probably not worth watching - the guys aren't as hot as DBSK :( And it doesn't end happily XP

I'm glad you enjoyed it though :) Thanks for commenting! ^_^

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