#42 Theme 15: Every Second I’m in Romance - Sons of All Pussys; Tora/Hiroto

[beyondtheremix]

Title: Sink or Swim
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 015 Every Second I’m in Romance (Sons of All Pussys)
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Tora/ Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, angst
Comments: Thank you tingedwords for typing this up for me ;D

Comments

[gioiadivisione]

1asd;klfalj AWWWW. I want more of this. A sequel maaaybe?

[beyondtheremix]

LOL nononononono!

I'm terrible at sequels XD I can't do them!!! Or else they take forever to do and come out crappy and by the time I post them everyone's forgotten about the story that came before it and YEAH. No sequels! XD

I've tried to do chapter fics but they all sort of die on me because I lack motivation LMAO...

ANYWAY. Thanks for reading!

[invisiblehabits]

The next day the rain was gone and Hiroto with it.

That is love right there. Oh yes, so much love of this I don't know where to begin. I love the pace of this story, slow and simple with hints of happy in all the sad. Tora's obvious pain, his desire to be someone else, his hopes someone had come to help him and only him. And then Hiroto's sadness when he knew he couldn't be what Tora wanted him to be, when he realised he was seen for something else than he was...

I am a sucker for angst and sad and bittersweet, and this was all three! I also love the ending, truly love how Tora went back home and back to his life, but with a faint hope that one day he will find Hiroto again so that he can see him for what he is, special all on his own doing.

This is the kind of story I will find myself thinking back upon, making up little sequels in my head just for my own amusement, the kind of story I adore! Don't stop writing hun, you're too good, I don't care how long I have to wait between the stories, just keep them coming at your own pace.

[beyondtheremix]

I think at a certain point Tora did realize his expectations were too high or rather very unrealistic. He knew they were alike in wanting to please others, he just ended up say the wrong thing at the wrong time to poor Pon and didn't realize it until after :\

Boooooo Hiroto where'd you go ;A;

Oh! I will tell you about the letter XD! An alternate ending perhaps? LOL.

Anyway this little girl is writing to her friend from the diner where her mom works. She helps out there too and one morning she looks up and there is this guy standing out front, shirtless with the sun at his back. So she steps out and asks him if he's lost and needs help. I think he says he is lost, but it's okay. He takes off his glasses and they're a bit cracked now. He gives them to the little girl and asks her if she can throw them away from him, he doesn't need them anymore. She says sure and watches him leave, but in the end she likes the specs too much to throw them out so she starts to wear them around the diner and out on the beach

[invisiblehabits]

I like that thought! The idea of Tora getting a sign Hiroto is still around somewhere, taking the glasses so he has a legitimate reason to approach his 'angel' when (no if:s here) he finds him, and so they can be reunited! It's good you give them the chance of being together at some point, me I tend to kill people... :/

Writing can be a bitch, no need to tell me. I just hope you find the will and energy, and co-operative muses *glares at Kenzo*, to write and post a story here and there. Like I said, they are so worth the wait! <3

[beyondtheremix]

LOL "me I tend to kill people... :/"

There must be hope! The show must go on! And thank you for waiting ;~; I'm a pretty positive person and I think that ultimately we all must move on with our lives. We can leave things behind, take some things with us, but in the end there's only one way to go no matter how hard anyone tries to deny it. And that's forward. So whether or not they have a happy or sad ending, they still have to move forward.

At least, of course, until they get to The Final End. When you kill them LOL ;P

[blindcottonlove]

I'm totally with the commenters above; you should write more because your style is so unique and capturing that it makes everyone else go green with envy :D

This was a charming piece. I was drawn to the way it developed: at first it had a somehow pretty realistic tinge to it, with glimpses of the young bulimic Tora we've read of in interviews, and then slowly, as if it was a dream, the story glided into this beautiful fantasy with angel boy Hiroto. Amaaazing♥

So, thanks for sharing :) I wish I could say more but I'm so astouned that this is all I manage ^o^

[beyondtheremix]

BAAAAAHHHH You flatter me waaaaaaaaaay too much! >///<; These days I can hardly sit down long enough to put two sentences together =__= It's pretty terrible. I can't tell if it's writer's block or just plain old laziness, but I'm glad you liked this! I actually like this story too LOL! Out of the stories I've written I think this is one of my more favorite ones :]

Ahhh yeeees~ You caught the Tora interviews hurhur. I guess the beach can be a healing place if you're looking for healing and I think Tora was just looking for anything to focus all his hopes and expectations on.

Anyway, thanks for reading!!!!

[mizerablyme]

this is just beautiful <3

it tugged at my heart, and I think I might start crying any minute now T__T

thank you for sharing :)

[beyondtheremix]

T____T

Don't cry, there's always hope! There's always tomorrow!

Thank you for reading<333

[akiyaimitation]

Uhm.... O__O

Okay, Ida made me read this. I was kind of doing something else all day and didn't get to read before now and somehow I wasn't expecting any more than a quick read before bed.

But I am actually crying. That was so sad and so beautiful at the same time! I don't know, it was so unexpected, when Tora's little world crumbled under his feet and he saw Hiroto for what he really was...

I don't even have words for it.. I may come up with a decent comment some day but... I'm just crying and I just ranted about this to everyone who cared to listen O.o

You killed me!

Thank you!

//Aki

[beyondtheremix]

D'AWWWWWWWWWWW THANK YOU ♥
I'm happy you liked it even though it made you cry ;_; *hands you tissue*

I think oftentimes we have expectations we want to fill and expectations we want others to fill. And, just as often, they're unrealistic expectations. I think it's a part of life, a part of growing up, and Tora was learning that lesson the hard way :[

Thank you for reading! And LOL Ida told you to read this?!! She is too nice D: <3

[akiyaimitation]

You're very welcome!

*Hands back soiled tissues* O______o

I believe that it very true. I just somehow hadn't expected that at all! Maybe I was unfocused but really I think it was just your awesome writing <3

And yes, she did xD She attacked me on msn with a 'AKI!!! You have to read this!!!' and so I did. She's pimpin' ya~

[beyondtheremix]

Buwahahahahahaha ♥