Chocolate - Part Four

Jul 18, 2007 23:21

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple. Inseperable ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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blackblood0688 July 19 2007, 05:43:53 UTC
*gasp* oh.my.god. WTH IS MASSU THINKING?!?!?! SHIGE...oh poor Shige...T___T And DAMN that Jin!! >____< I love it! I totally love it!! Keep up the good work!!~

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 05:47:44 UTC
I. KNOW. HOLY. CRAP. Masuda!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a stupid JERK.

WHY AREN'T YOU ONLINE ON MSN lsdnflshdt.

Thanks for reading =DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.

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blackblood0688 July 19 2007, 05:52:35 UTC
LMAO Yesss!!! >___<

I'm on my mom's mac...<.< I'm not supposed to be on the comp right now...but I'm downloading msn on her's atm...XD SHHH!!~

^__^ I love your fics!

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snowy_yuki July 19 2007, 07:11:33 UTC
OMGOMGOMG WHYYYYYYYYYYY??????!!!!!!
WHY TAKAHISA>>> WHYYY????!!!!!!

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 11:50:58 UTC
OH MY! YOUR ICON EVEN EXPLAINS YOUR EMOTION.

Hahaha. I know. Are you like...kind of infuriated right now?

Yuck. This is bad, and worse than I expected. Well only because I'm making it longer than I thought it to be.

I...I'M SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!

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snowy_yuki July 20 2007, 02:09:29 UTC
hahaha.. ignore me.. i'm a little upset bcoz of something else.. >.<

i love the story.. it's angst and i love angst.. XD
you portray each of character in a very good way.. ^^v

lol.. don't be sorry.. i can't wait how this will lead to..

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 11:52:40 UTC
YOU'RE the one that's making ME cry.

And I guess Jin and Masuda too. Like...geez this is just turning into a big huge drama that pisses everyone off and stresses everybody out.

LIKE A REAL J-DRAMA. WHICH PISSES EVERONE OFF AND STRESSES EVERYBODY OUT.

I. LOVE. YOU. <33333333333333333333333333

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shiny_satsuma July 19 2007, 07:59:19 UTC
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: *is HORRIFIED* Massu's behaviour sounds lk those typical cheating husbands... T_T
OMG SHIGE.... LEAVE HIM FOR KOYAMA

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOON *insert puppy eyes*
and ganbare with both your jobs !

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 11:57:09 UTC
I KNOW!!! His behaviour is exactly kind of the attitude I wanted him to have.

Always irritated, and just an overall stupid ugly.

I'm actually so ticked off. And like writing this is stressing me out! BUT I REALLY LIKE THE CONCEPT...I THINK I'M A SICK PERSON.

This is quite the horrifying fic.

I will try and write fast!!!

But time isn't in my favour this week =(. I work today, and then babysit...and then Friday I work, have a bank appointment, have Japanese, and have dinner plans with my friend...and then Saturday, I watch Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix (because I got free tickets, haha, I've already seen it twice), and the BOOK comes out, and I have an eye appointment.

I may be able to write the 5th chapter on Sunday...if I'm not busy readng the HP book...but I'll put some time into it =D.

Thanks for your encouragement! I'll go to work with gusto! Even though I'll just be pissed at Jin and Masuda the whole time!

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shiny_satsuma July 19 2007, 12:10:38 UTC
UWAH busy week ^_^ have fun AND GANBARE!

i was going to suggest you write it while babysitting but then...with all your smut inspiration it might infect the children XD

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 13:29:36 UTC
ACTUALLY...I was going to write after I put the kids to sleep <.<.

None of them can read...so it's ok HAHAHA. I'll keep it away from the children!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 11:59:32 UTC
I-I-I-I-I'M SO SORRY.

I THINK I JUST PUT THE MOST HORRIFYING IMAGE OF MASUDA IN EVERYODY'S HEADS.

Like. It's so NOT like him. You'd think Shige would be the cheater hey?

But I don't mind seeing Shige hurt as opposed to Masuda. K wtf am I talking about..EVERYONE'S GETTING HURT. Well I guess perhaps Jin...he's the one getting laid.

I can totally understand that you can hate me right now. I hate ME too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for reading =D!

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biancamasuda July 19 2007, 19:13:38 UTC
Yeah I can definitely see Shige as the business person...but I also didn't want to see Shige cheating on Masuda. Which would kind of hurt me more.

Masuda's my favorite, so I wouldn't want that. Even though I'm killing myself by writing about him cheating on Shige. This is awful. JUST AWFUL.

But yeah, ShigexMassu is really...unexpected. But MasudaxJin is even WEIRDER.

But all my fics are weird pairings that no one expects. I don't know why. They're just..funner to work with.

And WHAT?! JIN DOESN'T SEEM LIKE A HOMEWRECKER TO YOU?!?!?! I think he's PERFECT for the part!!!!!!!

It wasn't cheesy! I feel so...so...loved!

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