Chocolate - Part Ten

Aug 25, 2007 12:35

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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blackblood0688 August 25 2007, 19:18:25 UTC
YAY! You posted it!! ^__^
Poor Massu!!!~ T____T Damn that Shige!!! *pouts*
I can't wait to read the next one!~

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biancamasuda August 25 2007, 22:04:47 UTC
Yeah FINALLY. It took SO long. How could a chapter like this take me two weeks?! I am so lame. It was so lame. Oh well =). I'll try and make a better one next time!

I know! I feel so bad. Aggghhhhh. Nothing ever goes right!!!!!

<333

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rin223 August 25 2007, 22:00:25 UTC
i think i'm crazy, but i read all ten in one go. lol.

well, i've seen the fic around before, but i wasn't too keen on the pairing. HOWEVER, it's been going on for a while, so i thought that it must be a great fic!

omgsh. this totally blew me away. wow. the ongoing drama...i know you hate it, but it wouldn't be right if the original pair immediately forgave each other and got back together. it just doesn't work that way.
[i think i'm biased towards shigexkusano. lol.] okay, that's probably why.
BUT ANYWAYS, it's wonderful, so don't get discouraged!

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biancamasuda August 25 2007, 22:11:57 UTC
You read all of it in one go?!?! You literally read 60+ pages! Most of the time I write 6+ pages per chapter. Good on you!

And thanks so much! I love reading fics in one go. I find it satisfying. HAHA. Better if it's done. But this one won't be ending just yet =).

You know, most people won't give it a chance because of the pairing. I get that a lot in comments =). But the thing is, I never write typical pairings except for...YuyaxMasuda. And I've only done that twice, considering they are my favorite pairing of all time. I dislike cliche pairings though...I'm not very good at them =).

It blew you away?! Really? Well...thanks so much! I'm glad I can...blow away? =DDDD. Yeah I hate the drama, but I'm writing it, so I guess I like it too. Drama is my thing. I'm not good at being funny in fics, but I'm good at...sad/depressing/crazy/intense things.

ShigexKusano is so cute EEEEEEEKKKK.

Thank you so much! I'll try not to be discouraged =D!

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yuyamassu August 25 2007, 23:38:05 UTC
Wah~
I woke up early in the morning and saw your fic!
And this chapter seems to really smack my mind...

I PITY Masuda~T_____T

Did Shigeaki have a change of heart???
I hope not!T____T
Idon't believe he'll love hironori that easily...

Why won't Jin just give up~
He's such a.....asshole?
I can't find the word to describe him anymore~

Thanks for the update!

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biancamasuda August 26 2007, 00:37:53 UTC
I feel SO bad for Masuda. He seems to be getting the worst fate so far, right now.

First it was Shige...now Masuda! Agh! Why can't I just let them settle!

I'm crazy, that's why. And I love drama. Teehee.

I KNOW. WHY IS JIN STILL IN THIS FIC?! GOD. IT'S SO SCREWED UP. STOP IT. YOU'RE OUTTA HERE, BUSTER. NO ONE LIKES YOU.

Thanks for reading =DDD!!!!

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biancamasuda August 26 2007, 00:40:42 UTC
I KNOW! DAMNIT, SHIGE! NO! STOP LYING TO YOURSELF. YOU LOVE MASUDA AND THAT IS IT. KUSANO IS AMAZING, BUT NOT FOR YOU OK? HE CAN FIND SOMEONE HOT. OK? OK?!?!?!?!?!

Yeah he really is being chicken shit. Masuda. It's so irritating. I bet if he went to go see Shige, it would all work out. HAHA. THIS IS MY FIC? WHAT THE?! HAHAHA. I'M LIKE. GUESSING WHEN I ALREADY KNOW. I'm such a lameoid.

I KNOW. JIN. SERIOUSLY. Why is he even here?! Like why is he still here?! I just don't get it. I thought he was done for. Geez.

Masuda and Ohkura? Hmmm. Well. I'll try not to. JUST KIDDING. Hahaha. Man I just love adding new pairings. Just kidding they aren't pairing. CALM DOWN, CALM DOWN. DON'T WORRY. Hahaha. I'm so crazy.

OMFG. YES. GO FINISH YOUR ENGLISH ESSAY. GO GO GO.

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azeleghia August 26 2007, 00:05:36 UTC
T________T Shige how could you?!?!?!?! *sobs* Poor Massu all by himself...he really needs a hug but i hope to god that he doesn't get together with anyone else or my hair will fall out from stress ^________^ Pleasantries now over: FUCKING HELL JIN NEEDS TO DIE IN A REALLY REALLY REALLY BIG HOLE AND ROT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yea~~~! >....< *is really hating Jin right now* Anyway, i still liked this chapter (filler and all) I've been checking my f-list like 5 times a day to check for this chapter so YAY that it's up. <33333 byebye

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biancamasuda August 26 2007, 00:45:51 UTC
I KNOW!

MASUDA NEEDS HIS BOYTOYFRIEND, SHIGE.

I'm sorry! I don't want you to lose hair! I'M SO SORRY.

Yeah I know. I really have no idea what Jin is still doing in the fic. Who are you? Why are you still here, Jin? Why? HAHAHA. I'm so mean to him.

I'M SORRY. I know...it took me an unnaturally long time to update. But if I settle into my new job quickly, I'll be able to write the next installment soon, because the plots are exploding in my brain. So hopefully I can get off my ass and write. I mean get ON my ass and write =D.

Thanks for reading <33333. You are such a sweetheart <333!

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