Chocolate - Part Ten

[biancamasuda]

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple

Comments

[amaikoryori]

YOU UPDATED! THIS WAS GREAT~! :] Shige and Hiro fit so well together, but what will happen to Taka? D: Let me wait for the next episode. ^^v

[biancamasuda]

I know! Shige and Kusano really do fit so well together. Which is BAD. Because it has to be Masuda and Shige, darnit!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah. Just keep reading, and you'll see =DDD!

[amaikoryori]

yanno? i keep on coming back to this while writing my essay. so. anyway, i love angst, and you write angst? and I FORGOT ABOUT JIN and then, OHKURA COMES ALONG whut!?!?!?

[biancamasuda]

I know! Even Ohkura is in the story. You'd think after getting punched in the face he'd stay in the sidelines. HAHAHAHAHA.

Is this considered angst? I don't even know =(

[ceylon_miko]

Yes update!!! Even if you don't like the chaper I do~ Progress is always good. I feel bad for Massu I really do, but I'm not mad a Shige. *sigh* I'm almost worried if Kusano is going to get hurt because of this. All he has done was try to be helpful to everyone, and he got caught up in it. Ah yes and good Ohkura. It always good to help out a friend in need!

Jin on the other hand... I can't really say I feel sorry for him. He likes Massu, but he never should had done what he did. He hurt Massu so much. T.T

Yeah enough of my rambling. >< I'm so glad for the new chapter!

[biancamasuda]

You think this chapter progressed the story?! I guess it kind of does. I really didn't think so at first...but just skimming through it again, that kind of makes sense. Hahaha.

I feel kind of bad for Kusano because he had to fall in love with Shige. I feel like he's going to get hurt too. Even though...I can make the story anything I want. I haven't decided yet =).

I know! Ohkura's so kind, isn't he? Even if Masuda clocked him in the nose and broke it.

Yeah Jin really ruined everything, didn't he? Stupid jerkface.

No! I LOVE RAMBLES. I love long comments best!

Thanks! I'll try and update as soon as I can!

[ercinea]

I still love asshole!Jin. I can't help it. I think cause he's usually either baka or humping anything that moves or being emo in the fics I read this just feels refreshing. But I think he's started to actually like Massu. He just doesn't know how to be in a normal relationship, so he does everything all wrong.
I will say it once again: I want JinxMassu to get together. *runs from bricks*

[biancamasuda]

I love asshole Jin too. I always thought of him as such a character, but people really just think he's a stupid guy. I'm really sure he's not that stupid.

Anyway. Yeah. He is definitely starting to like Masuda...but obviously doesn't know what to do, so hopefully he doesn't ever figure out what to do and just stay away.

Oh wait...YOU WANT THEM TOGETHER. Ok well. We'll see. I have 935729307452937509732405978230753 different endings for this fic, and I'm just trying to pick the right one.

Not that it is ending too soon =DDDDD!

[ercinea]

I know I'm in the minority with liking him, so I'm not expecting miracles. I don't know if I want it to end. :(

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[biancamasuda]

I kind of don't want it to end either. I'll feel like a few months of my life are gone when it's over. It's sad.

But I'll keep writing fics for sure =DDD!

[starry_]

oh hun, don't be too bad on yourself. this chap is good ne. I mean, it does bring a message. And hell, you know how much we love drama XD~~ *hugsss* so it'a alright, just relax. we love you too lol~~ *huggles

I'm loving the story so far, gambatte!!

[biancamasuda]

AWWWWW, thank you TT____________________TT

Soooo sweet.

Yes. I guess everyone would have ditched me if no one liked drama. HAHAHA. I adore writing all this fuss. I'm so ridiculous, hahaha!!!

Awww good! Because I really love you guys!!!

Thanks!!! I'll try and write the next chapter soon!

[shiny_satsuma]

OMG PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE tell me its not going to STAY like that 0______________0

*dies* I THOUGHT YOU LIKED MASUDA XD

[biancamasuda]

I-I-I-I-I'M SORRY. I HOPE IT WON'T STAY LIKE THAT.

I do like Masuda. I think I'm just being a sadistic crazy right now. HAHAHA.

I WANT MASUDA TO HAVE A GOOD FATE. DON'T GIVE UP MASUDA. =DDDDDDDDDDDD