Chocolate - Part Ten

Aug 25, 2007 12:35

Title: Chocolate
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS, KAT-TUN
Pairing: Masuda×Shige, Masuda×Jin, Shige×Kusano
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own them because a 82536892365982635 year old pedophilidic man owns them.
Summary: Masuda and Shige have been dating since high school, now deeply in love in their adult years...they could be considered a married couple ( Read more... )

kat-tun, nc-17, news, r

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kirahita August 27 2007, 07:48:13 UTC
Shhh, don't tell anyone I'm commenting! I'm supposed to be on hiatus, working on my paper that's due tomorrow!!

I MISS YOUUUUUUUUU!!! I WANT TO TALK TO YOU. TT___TT

I just read all of the chapters and, OMG, I LOVE IT. When you finish it, I'm going to favorite it~

And, yay! You're finally writing pron! LOL. You finally gave in, ne~? XDDD

Psh, not exciting? What are you talking about? I love all of your fics and chapters! They're always so fun to read even if they're about emoemocrycry!things. :3

AND YESH. I LOVE MASUDA WITH ALL MY HEART AND SOUL. WAIT, NO, I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART AND SOUL. ♥

I hope things get better for you! And don't apologize for anything! Your life comes before writing fics and LJ! がんばって!(<--I hope that those aren't just a bunch of blocks and strange...things.)

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biancamasuda August 28 2007, 00:51:32 UTC
ON HIATUS?

That's where you've been?! I've totally missed you TT____________________TT.

Yay, I'm so happy you read all of them!!! I'm really glad =DDDD. I was really wondering where in the world you have been.

IT'S NOT LIKE. 100% PORN. IS IT?! It's not. I can't get into too much detail because I don't know what to say, really. HAHAHAHA.

Thank you. Sometimes I don't believe in myself, but I know I should just have confidence and try my hardest =DDDD.

I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART AND SOUL TOO. EEEEK. =DDDD

Pfft. Eff my life. I LIKE LJ AND WRITING FICS. Hahaha. Just because my life is so lame...work work work. Deadly lame.

And don't worry, it's not strange blocks or anything =D.

"がんばって!" Right? I usually never type anything in Japanese, but since you started, ありがとう クロ!!!

<333

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shigekamenashi August 27 2007, 09:14:10 UTC
D: nande?!
ok first...Shige i love you babe you know i do but WHY ON HELL ARE YOU WITH KUSANO AND NOT WITH MASSU!?!?!
and massu >_< stop being shitty and pick up some guts and talk to shige D: you know he will be back with you if you beg him to do it D:
and jin... why are you stil on this..?? >_> die jin die
and.. please tell me you arent messing with tadayoshi and massu D: that will be like...making massu even more sluty D:
and btw! this was like sooo good but i was like getting so mad at shige because of what he had done ;0; you are making me hate my baby~

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biancamasuda August 28 2007, 00:59:13 UTC
I KNOW. MASUDA IS SUCH A COWARD. JUST DO IT, MAN...JUST DO IT.

Yeah. Jin really is useless. But seriously, if he wasn't around, then there would be no fic, yeah? Hahaha.

Masuda IS slutty. JUST KIDDING. I WAS KIDDING. But seriously. How can anyone resist that booty?

Thank you so much. And I'm sorry I'm making you hate your baby =((((

I don't mean to...honest!!!!

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snowy_yuki August 27 2007, 11:23:01 UTC
aaaaaaaaaaaaa...

*speechless*

okay .. breathing .. remain speechless ..

i dunno how should i feel really..
on the other side, i love that finally shigeaki and hironori got together.. but it's bad for massu.. i think jin should doing something about an "odd attachment" ..

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biancamasuda August 28 2007, 01:02:34 UTC
You want Jin to do something about his attachment to Masuda?!?!?!?!?!

Or...wait...I'm confused. HAHAHA.

Yeah...it's kind of one of those fics where you have totally mixed feelings. Even *I* have mixed feelings!!!

Anyway...I really hope everything works out the way you readers want it to! I'll try my best =D. It's not ending just yet though ;)

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ivonnemcgruder August 28 2007, 09:01:23 UTC
Ok, I couldn´t wait till evening XD Since you liked the last type of comment I´m going to write this the same way:
Massu: I hope you´ll admit to Ohkura that you were the first cheating. But now, you are doing well! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Do your best!

Shige: You don´t love him and you bloody hell know it! Your first reaction was enough to know that you do NOT!! Omg it has been months now. Make up your mind, plus! you should at least think about what is Takahisa doing now. You don´t know, hm? HE IS HURTING ALONE! WAITING FOR YOU! I should point the word ALONE! He don´t want to cheat on you anymore even when he knows that you are enjoying yourself everyday with Hiro.

Jin: You are still alive?? O_o

Hironori: I knew you were falling in love. I really want to say to you - give up, go to hell or something like this but...you are just damn cute innocent victim. I really don´t know what should I say to you. Maybe just... BE STRONG AND TAKE CARE! ♥

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biancamasuda August 28 2007, 13:09:31 UTC
Yes! I think it would be nice if Ohkura was there for Masuda. He needs someone right now. PARTICULARILY SHIGE...BUT SHIGE IS BEING A JERK AND PRETENDING HE LOVES KUSANO. NO!

Aw man, your Shige comment is making me feel SO BAD FOR MASUDA. I'M ACTUALLY KIND OF GOING TO CRY. SALDHFASLTYHLSNDGLSAYKGH.

Your Jin comment...BAHAHAHAHHAAH. Why is it that everyone feels this way?!?!?!?! I still kinda like Jin's character. It was his whole presence that made the fic. But still. HE'S AN ASS.

AND KUSANO...OMFG...IT'S SO UNFAIR. I FEEL SO BAD. IT REALLY ISN'T HIS FAULT. DAMNIT. DAAAAAMNIT.

Thanks for reading <333

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ivonnemcgruder August 28 2007, 13:40:51 UTC
Yes, Ohkura would be fine but:
Ohkura WHATCH YOUR HANDS and other parts of your body XD

I know that Jin is the most important character in this FF, actually it isn´t his fault that he is such an asshole and shameless bastard, is it? XD

Thanks for writing ♥

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kisekinonews August 31 2007, 02:06:57 UTC
I just wanted to say that I ADORE this fic. You're giving me anxiety attacks! Don't keep us waiting any longer! I don't think we could actually get bored with this story. Even with a slower chapter like this I still kept my interest. This story inspired me to write my own... Albeit it was a smut piece... ^_^ Thanks again! Can't wait!

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biancamasuda August 31 2007, 03:00:58 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you like it =)!!!!!

I'll try not to keep you wonderful readers waiting. This weekend the next chapter will be up. I'll try my best!! I'll be a bit busy, but I'll for sure get it up!

It inspired you to write your own! Great! Let me know when you write it, and I'll read it =)!

Thanks =D!

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kisekinonews August 31 2007, 03:16:43 UTC
^_^ Wrote it already. It's tasteful smut, I guess, but I think it sets up a nice premise. Not sure about continuing it or just leaving it as is. But it does have Massu action in it!

http://community.livejournal.com/news_jpop/1237928.html

In all its glory, or lack there of.

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