AHHHHH I WAS REALLY SCARED I'D BE DISAPPOINTING because I'm dumb and really wanted to do this dumb idea, and the heart-hurting stuff kinda just wrote itself (I had no idea it would get past 4k let alone 11k...), I hope there was enough fluff to compensate!!! Yeah Youngjae is just as bad as Daehyun in real life, they are a terrible duo, but that's why I love them :') I decided to run with it cause Youngjae is super competitive and calculating, but he has his soft sides!
Anyways, I shall now go follow you and slowly comment on all of your things, because I started reading them around the same time I got the assignment so I didn't want to give anything away about the exchange. I LOVE your ideas, and also your Younglo pairing (that's another thing I worried about, the fic being Daejae ahahaha)
gosh, your descriptions are so nice ;; lonely dae with the kids and sometimes singing ;A; when he's by himself it's such a sad image. (lmao but Youngjae works at a bookstore. xD OF COURSE HE DOES. ♥) OH GOSH, BUT HANA. ;3; hana, sweetie, why do you always get the short end of the stick ;; an extra rice ball. Just in case, he thought. JAE THO, YOU ADORABLE THING. ♥ "Wow, are you some sort of loser or something?" AHAHA DAEHYUN, PLEASE. HONESTLY. "Only the pure of heart can see me," the boy said imperiously, as if that explained everything. It didn't. /crying xD NO REALLY, DAEHYUN. PLEASE.
I love how they get off to such a good start though, lmao. ♥
“You can’t be serious,” “I’m always serious,” I can't with these two… xD; and Youngjae threatening to throw the food away lmao, DAEHYUN YOUR STUBBORN PRIDE. “I’m not a pony,” /CRYING “And Junhong, he’s only 6 but I swear he’s grown an inch every time I go back home, he’s shooting up like a plant. He’s a lot stronger than I expected too, considering he’s the only one that didn’t get to know
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omg, your subconscious is out to get her lmao~ xDD poor girl. ♥ it totally worked though! and yongguk's parts as well, he wasn't too harsh or anything, nooo~ i was just cussing because he initiated the countdown SOBS. EVEN IF IT WAS WHAT HAD TO BE DONE. tbh it's such a him thing, to just sort of drop the occasional catalyst/guiding word in a no-fuss way. it definitely fit. T_T EVEN IF IT MADE ME ALL AJHKJHAE
ahaha daehyun is all about the food, cooking with him is totes a more realistic dream than most. xD xD oh connie, you're so adorable.
wow your mom doesn't know what she's talking about though >:3 OR HASN'T SEEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS. ♥ as long as you enjoy it, you should definitely keep it up!! :D (I CHALLENGE YOU TO WRITE A MAKNAE LINE FIC SOMETIME, they were so flipping cute here jfc /still can't ♥♥) defs looking forward to more of your stuff in the future~ >:D >:D :D
*chokes on soup* HOW DID YOU KNOW I WAS WORKING ON A JONGLO FIC???? Haha it's scaryyyy bc it'll be nothing like here;; IDK IF I CAN DO IT so I might write some more short drabbles while I gather courage to tackle it >___<
oh, you're so eloquent with the way you put it, re: Yongguk. Ahahaha yaaay I like that part of good old dad Guk :D I'm not really adorable T^T I just...food is the way to Daehyun's heart and.............impure motivations >_< yay!! Hopefully this wasn't a fluke, keukeu I'm looking forward to writing more, so much gratification from creating something @_@ and thanks so much for your encouragement again ♥
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! Daejae's relationship irl is so conducive to fic dialogue, I love it ;A; (btw I love your works and so this makes me really happy ^^)
OHSDFKLJGHAHSDFKJ.......so I totally braced myself when reading Jo's comment bc I had forewarning, but I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS AND therefore I sat on my bed last night with an idiotic grin on my face for like 5 minutes straight and now I can finally reply...>_With a "Bang?" :D AHahahahaa sorry I'm not funny...but the way you put it...career, wow it's hard to believe there's going to be future ones, but I'm not as scared to write anymore ehehe
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Anyways, I shall now go follow you and slowly comment on all of your things, because I started reading them around the same time I got the assignment so I didn't want to give anything away about the exchange. I LOVE your ideas, and also your Younglo pairing (that's another thing I worried about, the fic being Daejae ahahaha)
Yayy~thanks for reading and for your comment ♥
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I love how they get off to such a good start though, lmao. ♥
“You can’t be serious,” “I’m always serious,” I can't with these two… xD; and Youngjae threatening to throw the food away lmao, DAEHYUN YOUR STUBBORN PRIDE. “I’m not a pony,” /CRYING “And Junhong, he’s only 6 but I swear he’s grown an inch every time I go back home, he’s shooting up like a plant. He’s a lot stronger than I expected too, considering he’s the only one that didn’t get to know ( ... )
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ahaha daehyun is all about the food, cooking with him is totes a more realistic dream than most. xD xD oh connie, you're so adorable.
wow your mom doesn't know what she's talking about though >:3 OR HASN'T SEEN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS. ♥ as long as you enjoy it, you should definitely keep it up!! :D (I CHALLENGE YOU TO WRITE A MAKNAE LINE FIC SOMETIME, they were so flipping cute here jfc /still can't ♥♥) defs looking forward to more of your stuff in the future~ >:D >:D :D
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oh, you're so eloquent with the way you put it, re: Yongguk. Ahahaha yaaay I like that part of good old dad Guk :D I'm not really adorable T^T I just...food is the way to Daehyun's heart and.............impure motivations >_< yay!! Hopefully this wasn't a fluke, keukeu I'm looking forward to writing more, so much gratification from creating something @_@ and thanks so much for your encouragement again ♥
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