i read this one my phone last night when i went to bed lol, but i just had to come back and leave a message becase omg. this. fic.
i was totally caught off guard with unicorn!dae and tbh i was weirded out a bit, because i've never read a fic with unicorns but it was still really interesting, i thought it would turn crach-ish, which i found weird because the beginning was kinda angsty, so i just kept on reading and everything was just so. good. you wrote something amazing, i mean, and not to sound mean weeps, but you pulled off making daehyun and yongguk a unicorn. your intro was so nice and really captivating, your descriptions are lovely and just brings out all kinds of feels, like this had an angsty kinda feel to it at times, but it was also funny and really adorable ;;
and then jongup and bb zelo i just- so cute ;A; AND HIMCHANNIE-HYUNG
NNNNNNGH AND THE END YOU ALMOST HAD ME ROLLING AROUND MY BED BECAUSE NO AND YOUNGJAE THEN REALISING WHAT WHO HE WANTED AND IT WAS SELFISH AND LOOK HE'S ALL GROWN UP JFKADSFALDFAKJD
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ahhhh this is so nice, I don't know how to respond >_< /flails
I don't know how my brain works xD it was a crack idea, but I get attached to the idea of making it serious and ended up running with it, I'm sorry it was so weird .__. you had every right to think it'd be a crack fic and I have no idea how to remedy that xD but I'm really glad you kept reading! Thank you so much for your comments on the actual writing part (I HAVE SO MUCH TO WORK ON CRY) it's super encouraging!
Keke rolling around is good, and UGH stupid Daehyun needs to be punched sometimes!! Uasdlfjhg I'm happy somebody watched the video xD I must have watched it like 50 times over the course of writing this, as inspiration. Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment! ♥
you made it work though, it was a really fun read, and i'd love to see you future writings~! c:
i clicked the link when just before i commented and when i saw which vide it i was so happy, he's so cute in it and i can't with how they added the blush effect dfkalsadfdcs (it was actually that show that made youngjae my bias♥)
wow my web browser crashed on me while I was writing this comment and THANKFULLY it restored what I wrote, chorus of angels singing rn
awww this was really lovely bictory :) I remember reading The Last Unicorn as a kid, I don't have the book anymore and can barely remember the storyline but I really liked it when I was younger. Sad/happy romances are so nice to read, and I think I would have been happy even if you didn't have them get together in the end. I really liked your little snippets of facts you put in there - ie junhong and the frog, jongup and himchan (so I'm guessing Himchan is younger than Daehyun and Youngjae in this), I might have missed a couple but I got those! I smiled when I read the part about Junhong talking about his froggie :) maybe it'll live this time haha
I enjoyed reading this AU and I think you did a great job, two thumbs up! Daehyun and Youngjae's relationship evolved happily and I'm glad it all worked out in the end.
ahh re: a sad ending, you're the first that said that! I have no idea if I would have been able to handle writing those parting scenes knowing it'd be a sad ending, what pushed me through was the promise of a happy ending xD hahaha "maybe it'll live this time" MAYBE. I'm glad you appreciated the little references though!
Thanks for reading and leaving this sweet comment ^^♥
It's an honor to be told it's one of your favorites! Thanks so much for reading and commenting, even though it's hard in English x) thank you so much for your encouragement! ♥
LMAO AT DAEHYUN CHECKING JAE'S SIZE OUT IN THE BATH Okay the countdown. I'm gonna start crying. Ok yes tears streaming down my face I'm so glad it's a happy ending and not like the book ;;;;;; Daehyun is a devil unicorn looool and if only Himchan was a unicorn he'd make such a pretty one Gorgeous fic!
haha Himchan was going to be Yongguk's partner unicorn but I didn't know what I needed two for and so he ended up being Jongup's friend instead, maybe when he grows up a bit more he'll turn Yongguk into a human too lol ;) Waah sorry you cried! Thanks for reading and for your lovely comment! ♥
haha I'm glad you liked it!! Especially since I like your stuff, I'm going to catch up on Antithesis and also comment on Drainage as soon as my chains of schoolwork are loosened (WHICH IS TOMORROW ASDFJKL) thank you so much for this comment, it was simple but it gave me loads of encouragement + happiness ^^ ♥
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i was totally caught off guard with unicorn!dae and tbh i was weirded out a bit, because i've never read a fic with unicorns but it was still really interesting, i thought it would turn crach-ish, which i found weird because the beginning was kinda angsty, so i just kept on reading and everything was just so. good. you wrote something amazing, i mean, and not to sound mean weeps, but you pulled off making daehyun and yongguk a unicorn. your intro was so nice and really captivating, your descriptions are lovely and just brings out all kinds of feels, like this had an angsty kinda feel to it at times, but it was also funny and really adorable ;;
and then jongup and bb zelo i just- so cute ;A; AND HIMCHANNIE-HYUNG
NNNNNNGH AND THE END YOU ALMOST HAD ME ROLLING AROUND MY BED BECAUSE NO AND YOUNGJAE THEN REALISING WHAT WHO HE WANTED AND IT WAS SELFISH AND LOOK HE'S ALL GROWN UP JFKADSFALDFAKJD ( ... )
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I don't know how my brain works xD it was a crack idea, but I get attached to the idea of making it serious and ended up running with it, I'm sorry it was so weird .__. you had every right to think it'd be a crack fic and I have no idea how to remedy that xD but I'm really glad you kept reading! Thank you so much for your comments on the actual writing part (I HAVE SO MUCH TO WORK ON CRY) it's super encouraging!
Keke rolling around is good, and UGH stupid Daehyun needs to be punched sometimes!! Uasdlfjhg I'm happy somebody watched the video xD I must have watched it like 50 times over the course of writing this, as inspiration. Thank you for reading, and for your lovely comment! ♥
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i clicked the link when just before i commented and when i saw which vide it i was so happy, he's so cute in it and i can't with how they added the blush effect dfkalsadfdcs (it was actually that show that made youngjae my bias♥)
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awww this was really lovely bictory :) I remember reading The Last Unicorn as a kid, I don't have the book anymore and can barely remember the storyline but I really liked it when I was younger. Sad/happy romances are so nice to read, and I think I would have been happy even if you didn't have them get together in the end. I really liked your little snippets of facts you put in there - ie junhong and the frog, jongup and himchan (so I'm guessing Himchan is younger than Daehyun and Youngjae in this), I might have missed a couple but I got those! I smiled when I read the part about Junhong talking about his froggie :) maybe it'll live this time haha
I enjoyed reading this AU and I think you did a great job, two thumbs up! Daehyun and Youngjae's relationship evolved happily and I'm glad it all worked out in the end.
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Thanks for reading and leaving this sweet comment ^^♥
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Okay the countdown. I'm gonna start crying.
Ok yes tears streaming down my face
I'm so glad it's a happy ending and not like the book ;;;;;;
Daehyun is a devil unicorn looool and if only Himchan was a unicorn he'd make such a pretty one
Gorgeous fic!
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