Firsts (and some Not-Firsts)

Jul 10, 2013 22:08

Title: Firsts (and some Not-Firsts)
Pairing: Daehyun/Youngjae
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2.3k
Summary: Every relationship has its firsts. These are some of Daehyun and Youngjae's.
A/N: originally prompted at my ask.fm as "daejae first everything"

For the first time... )

youngjae, daehyun, daejae, b.a.p

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mightymischief July 13 2013, 04:29:08 UTC
omg ;______; im smiling so hard to almost happy tears at several points on this fic
i love everything about this such a great read omg
omg ;______; u're amazing

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bictory July 15 2013, 03:10:54 UTC
ahhh, I love love love that you said it made you smile!! Seriously my biases are the ones whose smiles make me smile so it means a lot ♥ Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I enjoy reading your fics too so it's a bonus haha ^^

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bictory July 15 2013, 03:14:29 UTC
awwww if crying makes you feel good go ahead ;A; yeah these two will be the death of me too...and a lot of others @_@ thank you so much, that is so nice of you to say!! /squishes you, I love writing because of encouragement like this. Thanks for reading and commenting ^^♥

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dinodays July 15 2013, 19:42:28 UTC
This is so gooooood! xD I really wanted some cute happy fic today and this is more than what I could have hoped for! I love all the little details (they remind me of all the minor heart attacks we've had watching Killing Camp and B.A.P Diary, etc.)! You always write Daejae so naturally ^^ I'm gonna give you a big hug for writing this when I see you later. ~3~

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bictory July 16 2013, 04:50:34 UTC
ahahaha yep :) basically took a bunch gold canon Daejae moments and smushed them together (with some embellishment of course xD) I'm glad it hit the spot ^^ hehe I got your comment at the end of the work day and it made my day so thanks for reading/commenting even though you see me all the time ♥

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i_luv_tvxq July 17 2013, 16:51:50 UTC
omg dewd i cant ;~~; its like so much fluff and awesome and more fluff and awesome D:

each moment is so presh ;A; (/dying of feels over here.) i just love how potentially (?) real all this could be, like. real. it just fits so nicely.

it reminded me so much of ta-dah when dae pulled that prank on jae^^ and then when they made up after dae was angry <3 then the one shot ref D: i die of daejae everytime i watch that scene when jae's shot, so this just reminded me of my feels, giving me more feels. (yeah im not making any sense.)

and on a random note, i like the spacious spacing, it just gave each moment its own, um, moment.

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bictory July 17 2013, 22:32:23 UTC
aww this comment is so sweet, it's ok to not make sense xD I'm glad you enjoyed the moments, they were all picked specially keke ^^ and of course I based them off of canon events so I'm happy to hear that it was believable!

UGH ta-dah was seriously Daejae trolling each other like what an abusive friendship xD but it's those comfortable relationships that I like the best ;A;

lol at the spacing....I just did what I normally do so it's good that you liked it I guess haha;; anyways this comment made my day so thanks for reading and commenting!! ♥

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littlefuji July 19 2013, 09:28:02 UTC
No first time in bed!!! HAHA XD

This was really sweet and I smiled a lot ; u ; I loved how Dae only lets Jae see his body, and when Jae practically confessed to Dae in the bus o m g why is this pair so cute!! And when Dae cried at One Shot og you sap face <3333 Thanks for the read!

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bictory July 19 2013, 22:22:13 UTC
ahhhahaha....yep it took me a while to be able to even read it ^^;;;;;; don't even want to try writing it >__<

I'm glad you smiled, making people smile makes me feel good so thanks for telling me ♥ yes Daejae is the best and Daehyun in my head will always be a sap face hehe ^^ thanks for reading and for your nice comment!

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