SPOT for fearnoworld even though nobody has been spotting, because I want to tell you how much I adore your Daekitty fic that I found out I never commented on D: (that shall be remedied soon) anyways, I literally reference Daekitty every other day so ♥ I hope you enjoy(ed) this fic ;__;
omfg I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY I REALLY LOVE THIS A LOT.
Maybe it’s because he used to be one, but Jongup has a weakness for rescuing helpless creatures.
SCREAMS MY HEART, JONGUP!!! BABY!!! ;_________________________________;
The most use Himchan was making out of his ability to change his density was to make himself weigh less for the scales.
himchan you would omfg
DAEJAE AND BANGHIM BEING BONDED. THEM HAVING THE MOST POWERFUL BONDS. WEEPS HYSTERICALLY HOLD ME OMFG KJV KJDNVKJN
Jongup would never admit it out loud, but he likes when Himchan messes up his hair, or when Himchan gives him impromptu backrubs or one-armed side hugs. He’s pretty sure Himchan knows even though he doesn’t say it aloud. Jongup might like him even more than he likes Yongguk-hyung.
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Everybody looks at Yongguk, and Yongguk looks at Himchan. Himchan shrugs. Sighing, Yongguk buries his face in his hands. “Okay, for now.”
SCREAMS BANG CHECKING WITH HIMCHAN IM GOING TO KJNDFKJVN
waugh that's so many hearts ;~~~; as I said before I'm obsessed with your Daekitty fic and so as soon as I got your name in the assignment email I was like I HAVE TO IMPRESS THIS ONE *____* ahahaha so uh, yeah. You saying you loved it makes me so happy ;~~; /hugs
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thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment! Thank you for pointing out Jongup's pov, I wondered whether it was convincing or not, so I'm really glad you liked it ^^ ♥
Superhero au is awesome <3 I especially love how supportive everyone is of Jongup, especially towards the end. It was so cute, watching them grow and get together. Lovely fic~
I'm glad you liked the everybody loving Jongup thing, I think he really is the precious one of the group that they all like to pour love on so I really wanted to write Jongup/everyone fic xD thanks so much for reading and commenting! ♥
so, i wrote a long comment, then i accidentally closed the tab and it all went to hell orz i'm gonna try and re-write everything
this fic was so beautiful, i don't even know where to begin with the comment, there are so many things to point out ;~~:
i like supernatural fics, mostly because they are out of my reach as a writer, so i always appreciate reading a well written supernatural au, and this was definitely one. the idea was so original, nothing i've ever read before. despite the superhero storyline, there is also jongup's personal story, and what i love the most probably this: that despite them having superpowers you also describe them for what they are, young adults, facing problems such as finding love, family. they are superheroes but they are still, and most of all, humans (humans fighting a huge half-dragon-half-bird monster, but humans nonetheless)
the plot is so thick and intriguing, i loved all the original ideas, the fluctuations, the Refinement (i wonder how you came up with them?), the soulbonding part... god it
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wow, this comment ;A; I have probably spent over an hour just staring at your comment, thinking about what to say, and staring at it some more. Can I just point out how eloquent you are about your feelings?? And wow, am I glad you are, because this comment makes me all warm and fuzzy and glowy inside ahahaha
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i'm glad my comment made you so happy!! especially since i had a mini mental breakdown when i closed the tab and had to re-write everything again orz but i'm glad i did it ♥
"Can I just point out how eloquent you are about your feelings??" busted omg i'm embarassed /)_(\ i try not to make my comments a big fangirling but like, as a writer myself i know how happy a comment can make, even a short one, let alone a long one with quoting and everything..!! since i had to drop out of the fic exchange, i decided to make up for it by trying to comment the most i can, and show support to the amazing authors that joined this challenge, and your fic was really beautiful so yea, i didn't hold back aha
i like everybody loves jongup fics, there should be more everybody loves jongup fics. and i'd love to read daejae's backstory, so if you ever decide to write it, just know you already have me hooked up for it yup u~u
(raises hand sheepishly) guilty of the fangirling comments xD you are doing a great job! I remember being all "MY COMMENT IS UNWORTHY @___@" when I saw your comment on tcaramel's fic, so thanks for doing that ♥ you are awesome
I also love everybody-loves-Jongup fics because it's true, B.A.P cannot get their hands off maknae line, they are too precious ;~~~; ♥
in the midst of reading i'm already putting into mind all the things i want to say in this comment, but one situation after another, my grip on my phone's getting a little bit tighter. and as much as i promised i will be completely incoherent i just, ISNJQNSJQNSUNEJWNOPDHAKJDADNAJDNADJA!!!
THIS FIC IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! from the way you described the fighting scenes to the situation to how a bunch of characters interact with each other during the first fight i was totally impressed. I DIDNT HAVE THE SLIGHTEST BIT OF IDEA THAT JUNHONG IS THE MONSTER so when it got revealed that he is the monster i was MIND = BLOWN. i've always found it amazing how writers can create a whole new world solely just from their imagination put into writing so i was definitely carried away with this. :-) it's beautiful, and funny, and to each their own character. i built up a soft spot for yongguks hyung caring character because that's totally him and he carried the group on his shoulders. their powers are amazing. :-( the wit is there. and jongup being
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++++++++ onward now before i say more, back to the fact that junhong is actually the monster. THE PLOT TWIST GOT ME FALLING FROM THE BED SQUEALING THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING FIC..!!!! jongup's determination to go after junhong when he left is priceless. after they're little love confession there's just no way i can not be eagerly rooting for him. WHEN JUNHONG GOT TO CONTROL ZELO ON HIS OWN. :-( GOD.
i still have probably so much more to say about this fic if i push it but to put it all down, THIS IS SUCH A PERFECT FIC I HAVE GOT TO COME BACK TO AGAIN AND CRY. ive enjoyed reading this far more than i should have because everything about it is such eIFJSDIFSDFDdIf. thank you for writing this you're amazing.
have i said you're amazing.
have my hearts. ive grown an additional two because of this fic. ♥♥♥
asdfjlk...!!! I got this comment during class and I couldn't keep a dumb smile off my face the entire time as I was reading it, so don't worry about incoherency, I am much much worse xD
oooh you pointing out that you had a soft spot for Yongguk's character makes me feel real accomplished haha, sometimes 6 people is a little hard to keep track of and develop separately, so I'm glad he had a distinct enough personality ^^ and also I was super uncertain about just throwing you into the middle of a confusing fight scene so I'm glad that worked out mostly~
LOL the Daejae xD so I had a major Daejae breakdown (besides my normal every day Daejae breakdowns, from the Sukira thing) and I was legitimately worried about finishing the fic because all I wanted to write was Daejae but the super heartfelt scene was a good outlet to channel it into and oh I'm so embarrassed that my Daejae bias is so apparent ahaha...but I'm glad that it worked for the better and didn't deter the Jonglo too much xD youngjae's defining true love at it's very finest.
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im gonna have to read it tomorrow to give it all the attention it deserves <3333333
(and sobs thanks so much ;^; )
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Maybe it’s because he used to be one, but Jongup has a weakness for rescuing helpless creatures.
SCREAMS MY HEART, JONGUP!!! BABY!!! ;_________________________________;
The most use Himchan was making out of his ability to change his density was to make himself weigh less for the scales.
himchan you would omfg
DAEJAE AND BANGHIM BEING BONDED. THEM HAVING THE MOST POWERFUL BONDS. WEEPS HYSTERICALLY HOLD ME OMFG KJV KJDNVKJN
Jongup would never admit it out loud, but he likes when Himchan messes up his hair, or when Himchan gives him impromptu backrubs or one-armed side hugs. He’s pretty sure Himchan knows even though he doesn’t say it aloud. Jongup might like him even more than he likes Yongguk-hyung.
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Everybody looks at Yongguk, and Yongguk looks at Himchan. Himchan shrugs. Sighing, Yongguk buries his face in his hands. “Okay, for now.”
SCREAMS BANG CHECKING WITH HIMCHAN IM GOING TO KJNDFKJVN
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this fic was so beautiful, i don't even know where to begin with the comment, there are so many things to point out ;~~:
i like supernatural fics, mostly because they are out of my reach as a writer, so i always appreciate reading a well written supernatural au, and this was definitely one. the idea was so original, nothing i've ever read before. despite the superhero storyline, there is also jongup's personal story, and what i love the most probably this: that despite them having superpowers you also describe them for what they are, young adults, facing problems such as finding love, family. they are superheroes but they are still, and most of all, humans (humans fighting a huge half-dragon-half-bird monster, but humans nonetheless)
the plot is so thick and intriguing, i loved all the original ideas, the fluctuations, the Refinement (i wonder how you came up with them?), the soulbonding part... god it ( ... )
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"Can I just point out how eloquent you are about your feelings??" busted omg i'm embarassed /)_(\ i try not to make my comments a big fangirling but like, as a writer myself i know how happy a comment can make, even a short one, let alone a long one with quoting and everything..!! since i had to drop out of the fic exchange, i decided to make up for it by trying to comment the most i can, and show support to the amazing authors that joined this challenge, and your fic was really beautiful so yea, i didn't hold back aha
i like everybody loves jongup fics, there should be more everybody loves jongup fics. and i'd love to read daejae's backstory, so if you ever decide to write it, just know you already have me hooked up for it yup u~u
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I also love everybody-loves-Jongup fics because it's true, B.A.P cannot get their hands off maknae line, they are too precious ;~~~; ♥
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THIS FIC IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! from the way you described the fighting scenes to the situation to how a bunch of characters interact with each other during the first fight i was totally impressed. I DIDNT HAVE THE SLIGHTEST BIT OF IDEA THAT JUNHONG IS THE MONSTER so when it got revealed that he is the monster i was MIND = BLOWN. i've always found it amazing how writers can create a whole new world solely just from their imagination put into writing so i was definitely carried away with this. :-) it's beautiful, and funny, and to each their own character. i built up a soft spot for yongguks hyung caring character because that's totally him and he carried the group on his shoulders. their powers are amazing. :-( the wit is there. and jongup being ( ... )
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i still have probably so much more to say about this fic if i push it but to put it all down, THIS IS SUCH A PERFECT FIC I HAVE GOT TO COME BACK TO AGAIN AND CRY. ive enjoyed reading this far more than i should have because everything about it is such eIFJSDIFSDFDdIf. thank you for writing this you're amazing.
have i said you're amazing.
have my hearts. ive grown an additional two because of this fic. ♥♥♥
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oooh you pointing out that you had a soft spot for Yongguk's character makes me feel real accomplished haha, sometimes 6 people is a little hard to keep track of and develop separately, so I'm glad he had a distinct enough personality ^^ and also I was super uncertain about just throwing you into the middle of a confusing fight scene so I'm glad that worked out mostly~
LOL the Daejae xD so I had a major Daejae breakdown (besides my normal every day Daejae breakdowns, from the Sukira thing) and I was legitimately worried about finishing the fic because all I wanted to write was Daejae but the super heartfelt scene was a good outlet to channel it into and oh I'm so embarrassed that my Daejae bias is so apparent ahaha...but I'm glad that it worked for the better and didn't deter the Jonglo too much xD youngjae's defining true love at it's very finest. ( ... )
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