INDIFFERENCE, CONCLUSION

[big_brian_o]

Ok, vamps, here it is. The final chapter. I appreciate your hanging in with me and I really want to thank Heather and Sandi and Arness for the beautiful images! In this post, Heather did the icon, Arness the washington scene and Sandi the bedroom scene. Thanks thanks thanks ladies. Thanks to you all. I am not disappearing, just recharging some

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Final Chapter

[penfrasha]

Thank You Brian. When Slade pulled Justinian into bed with him and Bryant joined them, I whooped for joy. This chapter was the perfect ending to Indifference. To incorporate current true events into the finale was inspired. That black arrow, that thunderous 'Coexistence', brought tears to my eyes. I'm a spiritualist and believe that anything is possible. If vampires do exist, I can see it happening just the way you envisioned it. You've even got me accepting that some of us will end up as food for them. :) Thank You again. You write beautifully. I will be keeping your page bookmarked and will check back often to keep up with your latest endeavors.

Re: Final Chapter

[big_brian_o]

Thanks so much. I do believe in coexistence for us all, including the animals.

[mdlaw]

I put off reading as long as I could stand it so that it wouldn't have to end. End it did though and I cried a little for the poignant hopefulness of Bryant, but I laughed a little too for the fearless irreverence of Justinian. I'm going to miss this so much. I hope you keep posting on a regular basis. Thanks for all the marvelous places you've taken us. (there was only one thing wrong with this story...not enough food...but I suppose that couldn't be helped) m :D

[big_brian_o]

Thanks m and come back, because i will be back, I just need a little time to regroup.

[miapal]

Hey Brian,

Thank you for another fantastic journey! As I've told you before, I've never been interested in vampire fiction. But being that it was you doing the writing, I couldn't resist. And as usual, you didn't disappoint. Now I've actually watched a vampire series and a movie - I would have never believed it! I actually think this was your best effort so far. I will never forget the images you created of hell - they still haunt me. I hope to read more of your work and that you will be published some time soon! Take care and thank you again for sharing your gift! It's been a wonderful ride!

Love & hugs,
Mia :)

P.S. Thanks also to all the image makers who have greatly enhanced the visual aspects of Brian's stories. Great job!

[big_brian_o]

Thanks for taking a chance on it, Mia, and I hope you enjoyed your other vampire excursions!

[qafaddiction]

Thanks, Mia! It's always nice to know that readers like the images as well! :) I agree with you about the images of hell that Brian created... so powerful!

[melime2]

This was my first vampire story I have ever read. Like I have earlier said, this story was for me the most amazing adventure story and same time it was very broadening and instructive in so many ways. I thought that it could have been a rainbow design also in the middle of the crowd.

I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for this and all your other stories, we have had an opportunity to read during these years. You have been a good friend and so have been all wonderful people here on your list.

I am so glad, we don't have to say goodbye forever. I am always eager to find out your new ideas and love to hear how you are doing.

All the best for your studies and I hope you, Randall and Todd have a wonderful summer.

Mimmi

[big_brian_o]

Thanks Mimmi and best to your family, I hope your son is doing better.

[big_brian_o]

Thanks and same to you!