INDIFFERENCE, CONCLUSION

[big_brian_o]

Ok, vamps, here it is. The final chapter. I appreciate your hanging in with me and I really want to thank Heather and Sandi and Arness for the beautiful images! In this post, Heather did the icon, Arness the washington scene and Sandi the bedroom scene. Thanks thanks thanks ladies. Thanks to you all. I am not disappearing, just recharging some

Comments

Final Chapter

[sea7sons]

I just wanted to thank you for sharing your creative vision and talent with us.

I will miss reading your stories.

I hope you will continue to post updates about your future writings.

I am sure we will have the chance in the future to purchase one of your novels. Good luck and take care.

Re: Final Chapter

[big_brian_o]

I will and thanks so much.

[sandra_qaf]

Thank you so much for the joy you have given to me, and others in all of your stories.

I love the ending of this-the hope for all different people to live together in peace-a hope we can all wish to see. Although the end of INDIFFERENCE also makes me sad to know you are givng LJ writing a rest.

I wish you well in your future endeavours and hope to see your published work soon.

Love and peace to you, Randall and your son-be happy!
later x

[big_brian_o]

Thanks Sandra and I will keep you informed. I appreciate the encouragement so much

[universal99]

I like the way you have incorporated the historical inauguration of our first black president in the conclusion of your story.

"This world is ours as much as it is yours and we intend to claim our stake. We have abandoned shame. We have turned a deaf ear to your superstition and narrow mindedness. We will live with our lovers in the light and if you do not accept us, then you will be pushed aside and we will strive on."

Above statement seems to outline the current battle that the Gay community is fighting in this country to become full citizens with equal rights. A battle that one day will be won by the Gay community, who will be as proud of their success, just as black race felt when a black man won on election night.

Heartflet conclusion to a great story.

[big_brian_o]

Yep, it was a continuing parallel for sure! THANKS

[phnx55mn]

We share you with the world, after all, Brian, and for me, I do so gladly, only grateful to have been sent your way by one of your biggest fans.

So recharge yourself well, with all the thanks I can convey, for this story, and for the man you are.

I will keep my eye out for you.

Warmest regards and best wishes,
Tracy

[big_brian_o]

Thank tracey, please do!

[vivrbn]

My focus is somewhat off right now, distracted, but I do want to you know that I read it. I'll re-read the last few chapters together to get a better flow going.

Take care,
Viv

[big_brian_o]

Thanks viv, hope things are ok