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Everything (1/1) - A Bones Fic

Aug 27, 2009 00:03

Title: Everything
Author: billpickle
Rating: PG
Pairing: BB
Word Count: 2,151
Spoilers: If you've seen the S5 promos, particularly this one, I'd say you're good. Also, This one's also got a bit of a reference to S2's The Boneless Bride in the River.
A/N: Title comes from the Lifehouse song of the same name, though I had Jason Mraz's If It Kills Me and Rosie ( Read more... )

pairing: booth & brennan, tv shows: bones :), fic: bones

Comments 59

doc_3 August 27 2009, 17:32:24 UTC

Loved it to death! This is so refreshing, in the way you filled in all the blanks with enough plot to make it flow perfectly. Love it!

billpickle August 30 2009, 01:41:32 UTC

Thank you :).

You're not the only one I've said this to, but please do know that comments like this typically make my day.

I'm glad you felt that I was able to fill in the blanks well enough. It's just crazy, how in promos, they can cut and edit scenes to look a certain way when in reality... they play out completely different.

lizook12 August 27 2009, 18:41:31 UTC

*happy sigh*

You have such a way of weaving this all together. It feels seamless. It feels like them.

Loved Cam's revelation that this isn't new (it's not).

Also, He groans. “I just don't wanna mess up what she and I have together.”

“And if you don't mind me asking, what exactly is that?”

He takes a moment, smiling to himself before...

“Everything. What she and I have? It's everything.” because that is completely Booth, the fear and the recognition of what they have.

The end is just perfect too. We don't need to see her reaction because you can feel it through his words, the "murmured intimacies".

Beautiful work.

PS-Awesome song, too. ;)

billpickle August 31 2009, 00:43:22 UTC

As always, I appreciate your feedback, hon!

But this:

You have such a way of weaving this all together. It feels seamless. It feels like them. \

This is just ♥.

*happy sigh*

hollywoodi August 27 2009, 19:03:07 UTC

Awesome!! Loved it.

"This is everything"

If only... !!

billpickle August 31 2009, 00:43:46 UTC

Thank you! I really appreciate it :).

leah1813 August 27 2009, 21:15:44 UTC

This is so brilliant and so completely wonder. It's a terrific weaving of all the moments in such a way that had me grinning like an idiot when I was through reading it.

Fantastic job BP!!!

billpickle August 31 2009, 00:46:03 UTC

Aw, I'm glad that I had you grinning. I love it when fics, you're reading can do that to you.

Thanks for the sweet words :).

labsquint August 28 2009, 00:38:08 UTC

A lovely fic, full of emotion and real feeling from the characters. It's a wonderful blend of promo moments woven together and filled out in such a satisfying way. I can only hope that we get something half this good when Sept. 17th comes along...

billpickle August 31 2009, 00:49:21 UTC

I've mentioned this before, but I just have this feeling that I thoroughly enjoy the season premiere. Of course it's only a hunch, and I can really only say something when I see the episode for myself, but still. I've just got this feeling.

I'm glad you enjoyed this! I really love reading your stories, and to known that this left at least a bit of an impression on you after you read it, is really something that makes me... :).