[Fic] A Little Romance and a Whole lot Realism

Nov 21, 2008 04:39

TItle : A Little Romance and a Whole lot Realism
Fandom : NEWS
Pairing : Ryo/Shige
Genre : Romance, slight fluff
Rating : PG
Summary : The dynamics of Ryo's relationship with Shige
Note : My first foray into NEWS ficdom and of course my first attempt at Ryo/Shige which everyone is fond of :] Um, I know I don't usually post to my LJ so sorry for the ( Read more... )

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ununoriginal November 21 2008, 13:21:59 UTC
i am tearing, i am ACTUALLY TEARING UP. i teared up from the 4th paragraph and i am still very choked up - this has instantly jumped up to become one of my most fav nishikato stories ever!! i really dunno wat to say except i could read it over and over and over and over again until i could prob memorise half of it and still not get tired of it. every sentence is perfect in the way tat it conveys the theme of their r/ship, which u've described so wonderfully in the title.

omg this is like one of my most fangirly posts ever and i'm sorrie for the lame. u've blown me away with the awesomeness of this fic. here, have lots of hearts, including mine :)

&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

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binmusic November 21 2008, 18:30:00 UTC
Oh wow! Really?! Aw, I didn't mean to make it so you'd tear !! But that makes me feel all warm to know you did, I'm slightly sadistic like that hehe. ALDGALGKNAG! No way! Your fics are so awesome too! Your remixes of Gem's fics, they had me flailing around everywhere!! Seriously, I love your fics!

And the title is all due to Gem's brilliant mind :]

Lame? No lame whatsoever! I'll gladly take those hearts if you'll take some in return for all of your fics which I haven't commented on yet!

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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ununoriginal November 23 2008, 03:17:38 UTC
oh it was GOOD tearing, so no worries! ^__^ i love fics tat can touch me like tat &hearts

haha, u read my stuff too? thanks, i'm glad u liked wat u saw :)

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moonbyrd November 21 2008, 15:10:57 UTC
This is phenomenal!

Your insight into Ryo's personality is fantastic. I love that you included his thoughts about the Jimusho; the realism in this is wonderful! The little details you added, all of the little comparisons to "normal" relationships, are beautiful. And this line: Their relationship that had started out impossibly awkward and full of politeness had morphed into one that Shige could not begin to put to paper and one that Ryo would never consider giving up again. Just...just...incredible.

...your first RyoShige? ...Wow. Just...wow. Please keep writing them!

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binmusic November 21 2008, 18:33:23 UTC
Ah! Phenomenal is not a word I'd use, I'm overwhelmed by the responses to this. Thank you!!!!

I have this annoying habit where I cannot write about anyone unless I feel I have a firm grasp on their personality/mindset. It started that way with Arashi and for a while I could only write from Jun's POV and now it's Ryo. I'm glad that you though it was accurate :]

Oh! That line is the only one that is actually mine from the last paragraph xD The rest I sort of begged Gem for it because my mind was totally fried by the time I had to write it.

Thank you for commenting and I'll try to keep writing!

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lifesareverie November 21 2008, 15:39:05 UTC
normally i'm not a fan of nishikato fics, cos ppl usually seem to nail strictly on the snark and smut between the 2, making the relationship all physical & no love...but this is nice & pristine :)

"Because contrary to what many believe, the idea of being soulmates is not all fluff and love....and he still regularly fails at getting him presents."

mm..realistic fluff at last. you say it like it is <3
p.s. no idea you're into newS as well *sends you sparkly love*

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binmusic November 21 2008, 18:36:28 UTC
Hi you! I feel like we haven't spoke in forever! How have you been silly?

Yes! This is sort of the result of me reading way too many smut and bad snark between them. Ryo's obviously a lot of sarcasm but that's not all he's about. He's cuddly too xD In my mind of course lol.

Yay realistic fluff! I was looking for a word to describe my genre :D Thanks!

I had no idea I was into NEWS either. Then I was dragged in by Gem. DRAGGED I tell you!! And not only am I into NEWS, Ryo's converted me into a huge Kanjani8 fan. Eito's so sparkly too. Crack, but sparkly crack :D

Take care! Hope school is going okay for you :]

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lifesareverie November 23 2008, 04:16:33 UTC
hi silly <3, i missed our convos x) i have been hanging around lj a lot less cos of tests & exams. i ...i think ppl may forget me any time soon *wobbles* D':

YAY for seeing the cuddly side of ryo! have u seen how akwardly shy he was around nino & erika during interviews!! >< OMFG-cute!!

newS is my 1st love x) arashi kinda overtook but shhh... eito made me LMAO (in a totally gd way). way too much that my stomach hurts. xD

i demand a newS x arashi fic asjkl; that would make my brain explode with happiness :')
aww...i'm fine, just a bit sleep-deprived and cynical at the moment. u take care too *huggles* <3<3<3

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binmusic November 23 2008, 22:23:03 UTC
Awww! Poor girl, still stressing too? No one is going to forget about you! Just concentrate on your studies and I believe that you'll do fine on your tests. Don't forget about us! :D ( ... )

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jtriskell November 21 2008, 15:49:20 UTC
binmusic November 21 2008, 18:37:07 UTC
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment! Glad you enjoyed this :D

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nuerulez November 21 2008, 17:41:11 UTC

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binmusic November 21 2008, 18:37:29 UTC
Ah! :D

Thank you. I love hearts !

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