[Fic] A Little Romance and a Whole lot Realism

[binmusic]

TItle : A Little Romance and a Whole lot Realism
Fandom : NEWS
Pairing : Ryo/Shige
Genre : Romance, slight fluff
Rating : PG
Summary : The dynamics of Ryo's relationship with Shige
Note : My first foray into NEWS ficdom and of course my first attempt at Ryo/Shige which everyone is fond of :] Um, I know I don't usually post to my LJ so sorry for the

Comments

[gothicauthor]

alknsg Somehow, this is SO CUTE. XD

I love that you don't make their lives into a romantic comedy alsng the details of Ryo cooking and cleaning and Shige making him iPod playlists. [dead]

GA

[binmusic]

Cute? xD

Yes, those details took forever for me to think up hehe. But I'm glad you enjoyed this! And thank you for taking the time to leave a comment :D

[gothicauthor]

Yeah, I know, right... XD But domesticity is always cute to me. [doesn't even know]

GA

[binmusic]

Domesticity is nice, I like the homely atmosphere and I love picturing the couple at home washing dishes together or janken-ing on who has to do the laundry this week xD

[fireflychen]

Ehm, you know, if I could formulate a comment that would do this fic justice right now, i'd do. But sadly, I'm at a loss for words. Beautifully written and you managed to create such a lovely and romantic atmosphere. I love the little details (especially this: Because contrary to what many believe, the idea of being soulmates is not all fluff and love. Ryo does not finish Shige's sentences or thoughts. Nor does he have a magical sixth sense that tells him where Shige is or what he's doing at all times. The two of them do not share a straw or eat from the same bowl of udon and he still regularly fails at getting him presents. Makes everything so much more realistic!) And srsly, it's your first Nishikato fic? I DEMAND MORE FIC FROM YOU!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

:D

[binmusic]

Oh! This comment is lovely enough! :DDD I'm so flattered by everyone's praises, it's making me all warm x]

I'm glad you enjoyed the little details! I was aiming for a rather realistic view of their relationship instead of one that's just based on smut and snark (I love the snark, and I'm okay with the smut, I just don't think that's all their relationship is based on :D).

Ah! Yes, it is my first attempt at writing them, I read them enough and to be fair, this was more from Ryo's mindset which makes it easier for me, but thank you for liking it so much! Demands?! I guess this means I do have to attempt writing again? xD

Oh I love hearts so much! Thanks again!!

[fireflychen]

Well, no you don't have to attempt writing again. You just have to do it. ;D

[binmusic]

Easier said than done!

I just spent a good minute staring at Ryo approaching me in your icon xD

[lastingdreams8]

THE LAST LINE IS AMAZING:D
And yes, the title says it all, but it's so true:)
We need more of these:D I love that you pointed our that couples aren't always each other's 'soul' mates...they don't have sixth senses, lol:)
GREAT<3

[lastingdreams8]

out*
In any case-I love it...and yea *fangirls!*
The suitcase scene is great, seriously. Throwing an empty suitcase-the symbolism is so subtle, but LOVE:)
I love that you carried it to the end too:)
GAH....I want to say more, but can't organize thoughts...lol
<3

[binmusic]

Hahaha yes, the last line! It's all misticloud who thought up the last line. Genius isn't she?

Oh, I don't know if I even thought of the empty suitcase being symbolic. I just didn't want the suitcase to be too heavy, cos then it would hurt Ryo more wouldn't it? And I love Ryo xD Ah, I'm just kidding :]

The comment was more than enough! Thank you for reading and I'm elated you enjoyed it :]

[raviolikenshin]

Yay!

I love realism over romanticism everyday! Its the very essence of nishikato, and I think its well captured here ^^

Thank you, and I selfishly hope you write more nishikato ^^

[binmusic]

Lol your icon! HAHAHA!

I think I'd like a mix of romanticism wit realism, probably a bit more romanticism than I had in my fic. I'm not fond of the overly fluffy type of relationship where it's always red roses and candlelight dinners, but at the same time, I'm a girl, I'd like to be wooed ;D

I'm glad you thought I captured Ryo/Shige! That's what an author always worries about :D Thanks for commenting!

(Ah, I hope I can write more too...I think xD)

[aikomidori]

A boyfriend who warms his side of the bed on a cold rainy day and prepares ipod playlists for those lonely long rides on the Shinkansen.
Awww ♥ I love the imagery that comes with this - It's so everyday that it's warm, it's loving, it's completely RyoShige :)) (And Ryo washing Shige's lucky red underwear *giggles*) I totally loved this - I hope you decide to write more RyoShige in the future!!!

[binmusic]

HAHA okay well Ryo would probably make a face and moan about it to Shige later in hopes of getting something (like a footrub :D) out of it.

I'm glad you loved it :] It makes me happy when people get a smile out of my fics! I hope I manage to write more too xD