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biskybat

Five have Fun with the Marlows

Mar 19, 2010 10:41

Chapter One
Startling News

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bookwormsarah March 19 2010, 12:23:14 UTC

This is excellent and made me laugh several times - really looking forward to the rest. You have all the voices beautifully.

helenprev March 19 2010, 13:46:48 UTC

I am loving this already! Did you post the first bit before? It sounds familiar. Or maybe it is just because, as Sarah says, you have captured the voices so well!

Thank you for sharing :-)

biskybat March 19 2010, 18:46:42 UTC

Thank you, bookwormsarah and helenprev, so glad you like it because I wasn't sure anyone would. Yes, I reposted because I started it then abandoned it. Then came back to it again.

res23 March 20 2010, 07:40:58 UTC

It's fantastic!!

I only wish I'd not started Chapter 1 right now, as I have to go out shortly and now will be late. And I have a very busy weekend, and I'm going to be desperately trying to fit in time to read the other two chapters at some point, and probably end up being late again.

biskybat March 20 2010, 16:57:13 UTC

Thank you - and it'll still be here when you get back!

slemslempike March 21 2010, 22:28:14 UTC

Oh, I like this very much!

alliekiwi September 18 2010, 10:02:48 UTC

This is what happens when you get a new computer, don't update your favourites list on said item for nearly a year and then suddenly remember "Ooh, what about LJ??"

Great to see a 'new' (to me) story from you. I absolutely loved it so far - so funny! Especially Peter's comment about "Aunt Fanny and Cousin Dick - now tell me the other one's called Willie and I shall die happy."

*snigger*

A wonderful read so far.