Bones Fic: Losing My Religion~ Part 6

Dec 05, 2010 15:58

Thursday does not find him in his normally jubilant mood. What with having nearly lost his mind and all.

The only saving grace was Olivia working the graveyard shift last night; he has no clue how he would have explained making an even more complicated mess of things.

A mess that culminated in the necessity of a cold shower and a handful of ( Read more... )

fic: bones, fic: losing my religion

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makd December 5 2010, 21:25:36 UTC
Ahhhhh. Exactly what I've been hoping for: the resurrection of Jealous!Booth.

Love, love, love this: "The problem is, he doesn’t know which one of them he thinks of as the other woman."

Also, if I've forgotten to tell you before, you've written Cam and Angela perfectly. I love how they have evolved, and how Cam, in particular, is as protective of Brennan as she is of Booth. She's a fabulously written (and acted) character.

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:14:04 UTC
Thank you so much! I think that at this point, what he feels is far more complex than simple jealousy. But it certainly spurs him along, doesn't it? ;)

I love Cam, so, so much. I feel like I'm one of the few people who have loved her since the beginning, despite her initially being the antagonist to Brennan. I'm glad you think I've been writing her and Angela IC. I wish we would see them more in canon, instead of you-know-who.

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tempertemper December 5 2010, 22:21:19 UTC
Huge ♥

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:14:44 UTC
Don't know what I would do without you ♥ ♥ ♥

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tempertemper December 10 2010, 11:28:15 UTC
Weeeelllll I think you'd muddle through, safe to say - but that's very lovely!! ♥

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fourth_rose December 5 2010, 22:34:32 UTC
First of all: Yay, more 'Bones' fic from you! *twirls you*

Second: I'm constantly blown away by how perfectly you capture Booth. His insecurities, his anger, his jealousy, the way he struggles with his conscience - just perfect.

He realizes what he’d never even considered before: how unbelievably hard it is letting go of something you didn’t know you were still hoping for.

I loved that line - it sums up perfectly where he stands right now, and it's a huge step for him to realize it.

I'm really, really happy that you're continuing this story, and I can't wait for the next part! :))

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:22:15 UTC
Heeee *glomps you*

I'm so glad you think I've captured Booth well. Lately, it's been really hard to remember who he is :(

Honestly, hon, I couldn't have done this without you. Close To Home is the only inspiration I have had enabling me to continue this. For realzies.

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fourth_rose December 12 2010, 13:36:49 UTC
♥ That really means a lot to me - I've become totally obsessed with Booth's character this season, and knowing that I could help you out with a cup of inspiration because of that makes me very happy :)

I'm looking forward to reading the the chapter - the past few days have been crazy busy, so I'm waiting for a quiet moment to savour it properly :))

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fthpfthpfthp December 5 2010, 22:39:00 UTC
Damn, you're good!

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:17:47 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

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gemlily5 December 5 2010, 23:03:44 UTC
I love this. So very interesting! Want more. :)

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:23:27 UTC
Thank you so much! Next part is up :D

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:22:58 UTC
Heh, I'm glad you think so ;)

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