Bones Fic: Losing My Religion~ Part 6

Dec 05, 2010 15:58

Thursday does not find him in his normally jubilant mood. What with having nearly lost his mind and all.

The only saving grace was Olivia working the graveyard shift last night; he has no clue how he would have explained making an even more complicated mess of things.

A mess that culminated in the necessity of a cold shower and a handful of ( Read more... )

fic: bones, fic: losing my religion

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aplacecalled December 6 2010, 00:24:51 UTC
Great, great chapter. Especially

"how unbelievably hard it is letting go of something you didn’t know you were still hoping for"

and

"The problem is, he doesn’t know which one of them he thinks of as the other woman."

Thanks for the update!

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:26:59 UTC
Thanks so much for commenting, and for pointing out the lines you liked :D

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housemdwriter December 6 2010, 00:38:24 UTC
fffff I have been waiting for this :) And you're certainly not one to disappoint! This is amazing. I love seeing the evolution of Booth's emotions. He's going from sad to angry to jealous and jumping back and forth and being moody and augh you're wonderful. He feels very real, moreso than the Booth we see on the show at times.

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:30:53 UTC
Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm really trying to rectify the current mess on Show through this fic, so I'm glad it's working for you :D

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housemdwriter December 10 2010, 03:47:15 UTC
Oh, you are definitely doing a fantastic job!

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rachg82 December 6 2010, 01:05:07 UTC
This is SO where I want the season to go if they don't get together. Love it.

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:31:16 UTC
Thank you so much! I appreciate the comments :D

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biba79 December 6 2010, 05:02:57 UTC
This was just awesome.

I felt so bad for him though.... I guess he would know if there was a book tour too... wouldn't it be out there for people to go to the book tour? So if she's lying, it would be a public record of it.

Anyway, I love it. and I can't wait for more!

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:32:13 UTC
Thanks, hon! She's not lying about the book launch, just withholding some other information ;) Glad you're enjoying this.

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bantam_shine December 6 2010, 05:23:12 UTC
*flails*

I was thrilled to see you updated this story! :D I've been wondering when full-on jealous!Booth would emerge again. Loved the precarious line you towed with Booth, wavering between his new life with Olivia & the inevitable pull toward Brennan. I'm curious to know how the rest of Brennan & Angela's conversation would've gone, had Booth not interrupted. Can't wait to read what happens next!

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bite_or_avoid December 10 2010, 03:48:48 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comments, sweetie! I'm glad that you found Booth's dilemma believable. And I suppose, knowing Angela, she would have gotten Brennan to admit something she really doesn't want to admit ;)

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