Comments | bitter_cakes: coppélia

bitter_cakes

coppélia

Oct 16, 2010 23:03

coppélia
→ jonghyun x taemin; pg-13; 1716 words

( Taemin stops dancing at some point because the key has finished turning. Jonghyun catches him before he falls lifelessly on the ground and sets him on the couch. And then Jonghyun sees the most beautiful thing he’s ever seen. Taemin lips are pursed into a thin line and his eyes sparkling more than ever. )

rating: pg-13, fandom: shinee, !fanfic, pairing: jonghyun/taemin

Comments 44

bitter_cakes October 16 2010, 15:04:50 UTC

spot for obsessedheart who's busy with rock school. ♥

obsessedheart October 17 2010, 11:22:24 UTC

ROCK SCHOOL FINISHED OHOHOHOHO,
omg i loved how it was slight jongtae, nothing too romantic but kind of sweet at the same time ♥ i just needed this when i was like so tired from a saturday night and sunday mornings aren't the best for me so this really cheered me up and omg i want that kind of dancing doll but if it smiled... i'd actually pretty much scream too LOLOL, but i'm glad you're out of that terrible writer's block and just know that i loved this hehe.

obsessedheart October 17 2010, 11:23:13 UTC

and no, it was not creepy... picturing taemin smiling is like heaven... picturing a normal doll smile... /SCREAMSSSSSSSS

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 14:50:15 UTC

IT'S GOOD TO SEE THAT YOUR ROCK SCHOOL FINISHED. because it felt like it was so tiring for you. ): but if i get a dancing doll and it smiled at me, i think i'd cry into your arms. BECAUSE IT'S SO CREEPY. even everyone else who read this said it too. DDDDD8 i hope you're all cheered up
you loved this, i love you. ♥

omfg, cheesy.

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bitter_cakes October 16 2010, 15:05:43 UTC

spot for my taemzy captain deasyellow

deasyellow October 17 2010, 03:50:20 UTC

LMAO SHUT UP IT'S BEAUTIFUL OKAY IT'S NOT CREEPY. i mean, if i have a taemin doll and it's smiling at me, i'll flail and kiss him or something. only taemin doll.

I LOVE THE REPETITION IN THIS FIC IT'S ALL SO FITTING. and jonghyun waylt ;_____; kibum being the savior. lmao seungri Y U NOT BE A GOOD GUY PANDA.

I ALSO LOVE THE TAEKEY OMG ;_______; and sungmin cameo. okay great let me just say that i love the whole thing \o//////

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:56:18 UTC

ISN'T THE ENDING CREEPY? D:
LMAO YOU SPOTTED THE NINJA!TAEKEY HOHOHOHOHOHO.
i was asking my friend, "which kpop idol looks like they would steal"
she answered "seungri, because he steals gd's clothes"
so that's how he lands a spot in here. 8D

bitter_cakes October 16 2010, 15:06:10 UTC

spot for my 2min captain colorphase

colorphase October 16 2010, 15:17:37 UTC

LSKDJLDSKJFLJKSDHFLJSKFHLKJFHDSJKLF IDEK WHAT TO SAY.

THIS IS SO QT AND CREEPY AND QT AND CREEPY AT THE SAME TIME. ILY OK

Taemin dances, dances and dances because he was made and programmed that way, not the dances like oh it’s so beautiful and let’s clap for it, more like the oh it’s so per-fucking-fect and i want that doll kind of dance. If someone had to describe (because Taemin doesn’t talk) his dances, it would be the perfection of contemporary genre. It’s not that Taemin doesn’t talk, it’s because he sees the same foreign eyes everyday that they look the same, like aliens looking at a human.

“You’ll find your perfect person, one day” Kibum says softly as he combs his hair.
oh yes, taemin, you absolutely will. and the paragraph is <3

“Who the fuck is calling me at four in the morning?” Jonghyun grumbles out of his comfortable bed and grabs his phone. “Hello?” “Jonghyun?” Jonghyun sits up, it’s Kibum’s voice. “It’s Kibum. I’m sorry to call you in the wee hours in the morning because I don’t have anyone to turn into” Kibum’s ( ... )

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:10:17 UTC

TAEMIN WILL FIND THE PERFECT GIRL ONE DAY and that is me.
ily tooo <3

AND THE ENDING WAS SO CREEPY, I'M JUST LIKE WHUUUUT.

( ... )

aaliyah_babygul October 16 2010, 15:32:08 UTC

You've captivated my heart with this magnificence. Ive never read something so alluring and breathtaking. I wish it was longer but at the same point you said enough. Omg ily for this. Perfect gorgeous. Amazing fic is amazing. Thanks for sharing. Taemin as a doll is a brilliant idea. So dazzling and mysterious.

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:13:44 UTC

OMG THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL AND MAGNIFICENT COMMENT.
taemin is a doll is really perfect, the only thing it was a bit creepy at the end. ;A;
but thanks for reading ♥

meridianslair October 16 2010, 15:50:08 UTC

ahh, this kind of reminds me of an anime i watched with these live dolls 8o
it wasnt quite like this though seeing as Taemin can't talk, but speaks with his dance
this was really good 8)

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:14:52 UTC

/points at you/ OH LOOKIE HERE! ONE OF shawol_haven's MODS. HEHEHEH. HAI.
lmao creepy line.
but thanks for reading. ANIME, OMG IT'S BEEN SO LONG SINCE I WATCHED ANIMES. /goes back to searching for some good animes

meridianslair October 17 2010, 03:18:20 UTC

OHHAI I TOTALLY DIDNT SEE U THERE 83 loljk i did. thats why i commented~
bc im usually a silent reader *shot*
no problem 8D
IKR ITS BEEN A YEAR SINCE I WATCHED ANIME. I GO ON AN ANIME FORUM ALMOST EVERY DAY BUT I DONT DOWNLOAD ANY OF IT XD

may i suggest pandora hearts and letter bee kekeke?

bitter_cakes October 17 2010, 03:22:09 UTC

LMAO I SILENT READ A LOT TOO. /KILLED /SHOT /KILLED
omfg, i watched pandora hearts when it first came out. omg, i'm in love with xerxes break and that man is so sexy. ;A;

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