[FanFic] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 3}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a bitch

Comments

[nortonamo]

I'm falling in love with DBSK, just from this fic~
I teared up near the end, ngl.
The emotions in this, just omg. I don't know how to describe it, but its like I can feel it.
Idk I'm weird D:
These chapters aren't short, they are perfect ♥♥♥

[bitter_sweet05]

I cried writing it. I was debating not posting it because it's just... if it's that emotionally wrenching to me... just ugh. And I'M LISTENING TO W WHILE WRITING IT. /masochist for KPop

You're not the first to say that. I've had a few comments that have said it feels... very real. ;_______; I almost hate myself for it.

I'm glad you think so. ♥♥ the first chapter was like 1500 words longer than this and the second, so I feel like I'm failing. IDEK. >_<;;

[rayneweather]

Don't beat yourself up over chapter lengths; some will be longer than others. What you wrote is beautiful and powerful. This is an important moment in their journey and shouldn't be rushed or glossed over. It's a perfect place to leave us hanging & anticipating what happens next.

[bitter_sweet05]

;___; thank you unnie. I'm just really paranoid about my writing. I don't want to disappoint. x3

♥ ♥ thank you for reading, and I'm glad you like it enough to keep following it.

[makesmeangry]

I love this.
and it's just getting better and better every chapter.

<3

[bitter_sweet05]

APPA IS MY BIGGEST FAN. T_____T *HUGS*

♥

[makesmeangry]

/waves giant ameh banner

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[kawaii_massu]

Really... I can't stop crying. The separation feels too real and changmin's grief.. It was just too painful watching him like that, begging for yunho to stay.
Omg i really love this and i hope the next would be better. I can't stand to see changmin in a lot of pain like that.

[crimson_miharu]

AWW this story is making me so sad! But I have fallen in love with it nonetheless! I eagerly await the next chapter!