[FanFic] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 4}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a

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[bitter_sweet05]

*makes a spot for Appa*

[rayneweather]

I was just thinking about this story in the last week. How was JYJ? I wanted to go but I'm glad I didn't after reading about the huge, huge lines. That night I was in severe pelvic pain from my pregnancy and my daughter spent almost an hour with her face in the toilet bowl.

*sigh* I don't know who to feel worse for - Changmin or Yunho. Changmin's totally shutting down and Yunho's having to watch it happen & try to take care of him. It is endearing, though, to see how much the other 3 do care about the maknae, even if they're kind of oblivious all the emotional upheaval going on. Min needs to get better soon so that he is able to deal better when JYJ comes to visit. That's going to be difficult & awkward, even under the best of circumstances.

[bitter_sweet05]

I spent 8 hours on the sidewalk in NYC, haha. And at about 5pm, everyone suddenly rushed forward and I almost lost my bag, and then we spent 3 hours not able to move for all being shoved up together. I made some new friends though, and the show? Was amazing. I wouldn't trade it for the world. I have a new, high appreciation of Yoochun. *hugs* I wish you could have gone!

It was really kinda fun writing JYJ? Cos I kept imagining them tussling over the phone, and in the end JunSu ended up on the floor, and Yoochun was sitting on JaeJoong's back after he'd sprawled him out on the sofa. XD I'm looking forward to writing them more in future chapters. ^^;;

[bitter_sweet05]

^_______^;; I've gotta write some stuff for NaNoWriMo and finish off a JaeMin fic I started ages ago, but hopefully the next chapter doesn't take me too long to get out. I'm pretty sure I know which direction it's going so it shouldn't take too terribly long!

Thank you for reading. ^/////^ Things are much better now so I should be more inclined to writing, haha.

[shinchul303]

Am thoroughly enjoying this well-written realistic story!

[bitter_sweet05]

^//////^ Thank you for reading. I'm glad people are enjoying it, makes me all warm inside, haha. ♥

[bitter_sweet05]

saljkldasjklsad you make me all warm and fuzzy inside, you know that right? ♥♥♥ It makes me feel all epic when I post and you get excited. Haha.