[FanFic] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 4}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a

Comments

[satoshiice]

this chapter was awesome!I really adore your fic, actually I was just thinking about it the other day and than you updated which made me incredibly happy XD I'm curious to know about the "that" that changmin was mumbling about =P

[bitter_sweet05]

^____^ I'm so flattered that you'd actually think about it, haha. ♥ thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so much. :3

[yuukihitohira]

djfhsdkfjshdk I seriously love your writing style ;___; ♥ I love how it feels so real compared to some other stories and just...I really like it :D

can't wait for the next part~* (and omg you should post your nanowrimo okay ;;!)

[bitter_sweet05]

^____^ *already writing the next*

♥♥ You know my NaNoWriMo was what you were reading on Twitlonger, right? lol I posted up the first little bit already, I'mma post up the memory when I finish writing it. :3 It's just a story now, since I failed.

[hinfallend]

I've been a silent reader until now, but yay! You updated :D

Nu! Changmin is sick D:

I love how you write this. You capture what I imagine their emotions to be very well.

[bitter_sweet05]

o//////o silent reader omg, hahaa. I don't know why but that just feels all kinds of intimidating.

♥ thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :3 I hope you continue to, in the future!

[vhii1217]

i found this story just now! i'm only into homin these days ^^ this is very beautifully written. so realistic, heart-clenching without being tear-jerking. can almost imagine every scene to happen in reality.

ohhh i love needy maknae changmin and mothering yunyunnie! jyj is cute, they hurt me and break my heart and mend it up again. how come ;___;

waiting for the next issue! thank you for writing this ^^

[elphantastico]

i havent read a fic in about a year....but this fic is brilliantly written it has really drawn me in. late reader but i adore it and hope to see more. love it!!! <3