[FanFic] The Way You Aren't {Chapter 4}

[bitter_sweet05]

Title: The Way You Aren't
Pairing: HoMin.  's all I got so far, don't judge.
Rating: PG-13?  IDK.  No sexy times, guys.  Sorry.
Genre: Is angst a genre?  It could be romance, I guess?  Certainly not comedy.
Notes: This is the first fic I have ever written.  Feedback is appreciated, but please be constructive.  I don't care if you're a

Comments

[zaphkiel_noise]

This story is just written so well, you really need to update this.
And the way you describe JYJ arguing and worrying is just adorable. *^o^*

[bitter_sweet05]

I had about half the next chapter written and I was planning to work on it after the holidays, but then I uhm... well I broke my computer. @____@ So it's gone. I have to rewrite that entire part this week. I really need to update something. *facepalm* But I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥ Thank you for your comment.

[crimson_miharu]

Hi I read this a while ago and found myself re-reading it tonight mainly outta boredom but I find that I still like it as much as I did when I first read it. Do you have any plans to continue this?

[bitter_sweet05]

I had a large part of the next chapter written, and then around New Year's I broke my computer. Like toasted it completely, I lost a lot of writing. ;~~~~; So I'm trying my hardest to remember exactly how I wrote things? It's never as good the second time around, and I'm trying to fix it. >_<;

[flowercoffee]

Hello ^^
New reader!
I really really love this fanfic, the way you describe things, the way you make the boys act, their emotions..
I'm waiting for the next chapter *_*
Sometimes (or maybe often.. lol) i need to search for words I do not understand (*true love for Google Translator*), but is absolutely worth to. (-?- sorry for my english).
And, well, nothing else to say just because i dunno how to write in english XDDD
Happy New Year!:)