I'll build a stairway to paradise with a new step every day: James Wilson

[bittereternity]

Offering

By the time he is eighteen, David is straying and Jacob is set on being a guitarist or a lawyer, so when he announces that he wants to apply for pre-med, the light in his parents’ eyes is almost worth it.

Doppelgänger

That night he throws away his oil paints and wraps all of his art equipments tightly with brown paper so that

Comments

[endgegner07]

Ohhkay.
Did Wilson just kill himself?!
Or was he dreaming?

Anyway this was amazing and painful on so many levels, it almost freaks me out.

<3 it!

[bittereternity]

Heh. I don't like replying as soon as I get comments because that means I'm stalking my thread but oh well...
Actually, that's up to interpretation. I first thought of it as Wilson asking House to kill him, but the final version reads like Wilson offed himself in front of House.
Actually, I was going for him waking up symbolically but after reading it over, dreaming works too. (Depends on if you like fluff or angst I guess)

If you don't mind me asking, what freaked you out? It wasn't actually scary, I hope xD!
Thanks very much =)

[endgegner07]

I'm not really freaked out.
It's just that imo at least, you've got a command over the words you write that convey so much emotion in a sentece or two that it is astounding!

[bittereternity]

Wow. *blushes* Thanks muchly!

[chocolate_frapp]

wow.

[bittereternity]

Thank you =)
[Oh, and I know I didn't comment on your LJ but don't stop updating! Please, I actually really like it xD]

[chocolate_frapp]

OK. I'm taking a break from "Infarction-tastic!" right now but I will post more later. I'm doing weird dream sequences for each main House character.

[bittereternity]

Ahaha! Yay, can't wait for the dream sequences! Will House and Wilson be dreaming of each other? Or will House dream about you? ;)

[arhh]

This was brilliant, thanks for sharing :)

[bittereternity]

Thank you very much for taking the time to reply!

[cindy_lou_who8]

Damn, those were really great!

[bittereternity]

Thank you!

[srsly_yes]

Poor Wilson. The back story was poignant, and the titles added to each segment. Yes, I was caught between thinking he was committing suicide to escape his life, but hoping it was a dream.

[bittereternity]

Thank you, srsly_yes.
When I read it again, it did feel like a dream. I hope it was a dream too =)
Actually the titles are the prompts from 1character, they were so beautiful that they themselves did half the work =)