You're greatest advantage in your writing is that you clearly have a passion for what your writing about. You make state your claim, but you also approach the matter from opposing sides to prove that you can sympathize, although not agree with, the other point of view. That's the most important thing that a writer in your kind of circumstance would need to remember, because it is meant to be a persuasive article on a topic that is widely debated. If people see you as coming off as biased and generally one-sided, you're credibility decreases. The passion combined with vast knowledge of the Red Sox certainly established your credibility, so I'd say you've got a good start here
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ooo you know what though. As freaking awesome as you are with your sports analysis and the flow of your words... it's important to lose your biased redsox forever attitude if you'd like to do this as a career.
weird i actually am gonna comment about baseball. Over the last few T rides through boston i have learned to enjoy the politics of baseball. While i will never sit down and watch a game its still interesting to see whats going on with the team. I was reading about our boy brunson there earlier yesterday and i must say i completely agree with the trade. Brunson's future doesn't seem to shine from a distance but Willy Mo looks like he could help carry the team to another title in the future. As for the Vinateri trade, i sure hope the pats have an ace up the sleeve.
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just kidding. my dad's a sports writer for the WB. go back to school and i can get you an internship.
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And I'm not sure if I'd like to do it for a career or not. I kind of have my heart set on a front office job somewhere.
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http://youtube.com/watch?v=XclE8Xoh9kw
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