Theme #4: Outdoors...3 of 8

[bj_action]

TITLE: Going Out
AUTHOR: Xie
WARNINGS: This is a porn challenge. It’s porn.
A/N: Set somewhere in the “Only Time” Xieverse, maybe a year or two post-Risks. Beta'd by the porny lovely testdog65.

Comments

[not_yet_defined]

after all the teasing...i decided i needed to read this immediately. i am most definitely not disappointed, at all. I'm in love with this.

sooooo good. freakin gorgeous.

His hand came down and covered mine. He was leaning over my back, curling around me. I lifted my hand and he slipped his under it, palm down.

*squeaks*

He said my name once in my ear, hot breath, tongue flat on the side of my neck. He licked me, groaning, fucking me, my one hand on his, the other still raking against the rough ground.

your way of writing, method of creating images in the mind, kills me, in a good way.

thank you!

[xie_xie_xie]

Thank you! I'm glad it didn't disappoint you, after all the teasing!

[singlewoman]

WOW!!! Is ded from the hotness of that.

Loved the whole fic but these lines, OMG I love the way you write:His hand came down and covered mine. He was leaning over my back, curling around me. I lifted my hand and he slipped his under it, palm down.

I felt the heat of his skin burn into the raw places on my hand, little bits of grit between us. I felt the head of his cock bump over my prostate, the feather touch of his breath on my neck, his jeans rough on the back of my thighs. And everything burning hotter and hotter inside me.

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks so much!

mmmm yay

[foreverfolked]

Such great writing, I looooove this universe so I was so happy to read this little fic for it. You have such a way with words, the subtle details and gestures leave me breathless.
-Rory

Re: mmmm yay

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks!

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks, darlin!!

[jillapet]

ooof. That made my heart squeeze, it was so hot.

[xie_xie_xie]

Thanks! I love writing these little things. :)