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Meeting in a Dream - part 1

Aug 10, 2007 20:04

Meeting in a Dream - Part 1

Warnings: Fluffy.. sorta not really you be the judge, OOC, Shonen - Ai,

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Great start! mikasamu August 12 2007, 02:48:42 UTC

I look forward to more.

Re: Great start! blackash5 August 13 2007, 01:00:11 UTC

Thank you! i'm working on it, but i can't figure out how to hide it do that the entrie won't be so big

rex_sama August 19 2007, 12:18:32 UTC

Well, I want to read more! When I come to " “Nagi Naoe.” muttered Prodigy." I thought 'It's going to be crap, first they are enemies, 5 minutes later they will have sex in the warehouse', but well, they didn't. I like your style, Schuldich was a little OOC so far "“Nagi thank goodness you got out! Where are you?” came Schuldig’s worried voice" as hell Schuldich would say something like that, but well f*** this, for me you can even make him a pink bunny, I don't care. What I wanted to say... Ah, I don't like Omi/Nagi, maybe it would be more like Nagi/Omi, hm? Oh, come one, I left you so long review! Well, I don't like Nagi/Omi too, but I can stand it, Omi/Nagi always has the same Nagi-poor childhood on the street-angst, after reading so much WK fics it really getting boring, please don't make Nagi annoying weak child!

Thanks For the review blackash5 August 28 2007, 23:52:46 UTC

lol ur my hero don't worry I'll have it up soon =) ya unfortunately i like ooc schuldig i can't write bastardization very well so he's the caring type i just came back from a 2 week vacation so I'm going to start working on it again i hope to have it up by Friday or Saturday but i share a computer so i might have some troubles and then i have to get ready for school so GAAA SO MUCH FREAKIN WORK! don't worry there will be lost of nagi and omi momments.
=) thanks for reading you comment make me very happy