Portents & Remnants (alternate version)

[blackmavriq]

NOTE: This is an alternate version of an idea collaboration with emo-snal. To read his version, CLICK HERE.

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The sun was sinking low on the horizon, its bright orange and reds setting the sky ablaze. A steady breeze tautened the canvas sails of the two masted fishing schooner Kestrel. A young deckhand by the name of Jacob stood forward

Comments

[furzicle]

Very nice story.
BTW, I'm reading the Hornblower series. I know you would like it, too.

[blackmavriq]

I like the hornblower series far better than the master and commander series!

[emo_snal]

O: blasphemy!

[blackmavriq]

Also, thank you for the compliment!