Comments | blacknerdjade: empyrean [5/5]

blacknerdjade

empyrean [5/5]

Dec 07, 2014 22:05

title: empyrean
Pairing: OnHo
Rating: R for theme (tragedy; supernatural, romance)
Words: 21, 815 total
Status: complete
Summary: The grief tasted like the morning after a night of drinks, like over salted beef, like the residue of a bitter chord, heavy and disgusting.
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EPILOGUE
( Until then... )

exo, minew, minho, minhonew, tofuho, onmin, ships, onew, shinee, snsd

Comments 17

sabsah December 8 2014, 08:22:35 UTC

Wow. Jade I'm so sorry. I hope this helped you as much as possible. It certainly hit me super hard.
Damn haha

You're kind of awesome :) Don't forget it.

blacknerdjade January 17 2015, 18:28:09 UTC

Awwww, thank you, honey. It actually did. A lot, so thank you :)

bbonkey December 8 2014, 16:02:10 UTC

spent these few hours to read your story in one go! Gotta tell you that it's wonderful absgfjkl you write them so beautifully perfect sobs
You hit me so hard with the angst, i kinda cry when you tell about taemin and jinki's part
Also minho, mannn i like when he casually invited jinki over to his house like that "family time", it's so domestic absgdfkl andddd glad that they had beautiful ending uwu
and yoogeun, he's so brave, polite and everything of a kid.. i like how you potray him as minho's son
sooo thank you for writing this wonderful fics, you'd be always my fav onho author fic *kisses*
Looking forward to your next stories ;)

blacknerdjade January 17 2015, 18:29:14 UTC

Oh, thank you buttercup!

legallizzie December 10 2014, 03:13:31 UTC

Thank you so much for sharing. It was beautiful and sad and hopeful. Well done.

blacknerdjade January 17 2015, 18:29:43 UTC

Thank you!

sparksfly7 December 10 2014, 12:17:33 UTC

I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope that writing has helped you to leave that place and towards closure.

This was a lovely read. You described their emotions so realistically, I almost teared up after Taemin and Jinki were reunited. The mutual confessions part was so sweet. I was worried that Onho wouldn't end up together, but - yay they did! And aww, Yoogeun.

Just wanted to point out a typo I noticed - it's Colombia, not Columbia.

blacknerdjade January 17 2015, 18:31:17 UTC

Thank you for reading this and thank you for you r kind words. Writing definitely is a escape for me and a lot of people so it helped. A lot.

(and I'll get that fixed right away ha!)

kii993 December 14 2014, 23:02:53 UTC

This was very, very, very touching. I ate a lot of cookies to cheer me up after reading this fic. But I loved it a lot. It actually made me feel blessed. That's kind of a great thing to achieve! I love Minho as a dad and Yoogeun is, god, the perfect choice. "Sorry to the real parents, Choi Yoogeun" lol I agree with you! Did I already tell you onho with kids is a weakness of mine? Because I say that a lot! But it's true...So imagine my happiness seeing them around so many children! I really appreciated the idea of Minho being a medium, a way through which the dead can reach the living. It would be great to get a goodbye everytime we lose someone. I am deeply sorry for your losses. I hope you found a little bit of closure and I really hope there is a good place for all the people who suffered so much in this life. Well I don't like getting emotional because I never know what to say to end the discussion. Have a nice day? Thank you? Uhm I am gonna stick to thank you because your story was beautiful and meaningful and precious. Thank you ( ... )

blacknerdjade January 17 2015, 18:37:22 UTC

I actually laughed at the way you chose to end this because I would have done the same thing... like...I felt like you were awkwardly patting me on the back and then slowly backing up and out of the room. GOD that was funny! Whew! *wipes tears*