Very interesting. And oddly relaxing. But then again, I am The Weird Hippy. I'd certainly like to read more soon. So get to work!! ~~Editor notes~~ Take out one of the 'watch''s four seems a bit redundent.. Mispelled 'kindergartner' Missing space in the third...stanza? in 'let' and 'myself'
I'm doing the editing just because I'm really bored but not tired enough to sleep just yet, so...if you want me to stop, just tell me. If you want me to continue, tell me, 'cause I like talking to you. :)
As I normallr don't mind that was not so much a story as a post to get me back in the groove of Lj. Haha. Sorry for the mixxup. Yes more will be comming, I'm not home the nexxt few days. Expect mistakes. I never spelled good and I type to fast sometimes the space bar forgets where I hit it. So.. You know. When I get published I'll worry about the rest.
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~~Editor notes~~
Take out one of the 'watch''s four seems a bit redundent..
Mispelled 'kindergartner'
Missing space in the third...stanza? in 'let' and 'myself'
I'm doing the editing just because I'm really bored but not tired enough to sleep just yet, so...if you want me to stop, just tell me. If you want me to continue, tell me, 'cause I like talking to you. :)
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Haha.
Sorry for the mixxup.
Yes more will be comming,
I'm not home the nexxt few days.
Expect mistakes.
I never spelled good and I type to fast sometimes the space bar forgets where I hit it.
So..
You know.
When I get published I'll worry about the rest.
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