An experiment

[blackseven]

I am trying to figure out if my ideas are too obscure and difficult to understand. I wrote my story for the creative writing championship and posted it to their forums so that the other competitors could read it and let me know what they think. Of the 4 who have commented, 2 didn't understand it. They liked the scenario and the way it was told, but

Comments

[outlawcoon]

It makes me somewhat saddened but I get it. At least I think I do. :)

[pipistrella]

It makes sense to me. It's something different, too.

[shieldhaven]

It's an excellent story. I immediately want to put it into a game. =)