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Jan 12, 2009 13:56

Title:Broken (oneshot)
Author:blacksoul12012
Pairings:Sihan, broken Sihanchul
Genre:Angst
Word count:369
Disclaimer:If I owned them, be sure I wouldn't write fanfiction ^^
A/N:This story just came into my mind when I woke up one day. It's short but I hope you enjoy it!

( All this tells you it's over and still all you can do is to try. )

!fanfiction, life:writing

Comments 11

followurdestiny January 12 2009, 15:00:51 UTC

Poor Chullie! ♥...

blacksoul12012 February 15 2009, 21:57:36 UTC

*hugs Chul*

innocently_hot January 13 2009, 01:51:11 UTC

aww... bad shihan... how could they do that to heechul...
i love your angst... write more!!!

blacksoul12012 February 15 2009, 21:58:08 UTC

I'm sorry...it just went that way >____>
I'll see if another 'great' idea will hit me!^^

danceinthedark January 13 2009, 07:04:02 UTC

I do feel sorry for Chul, but arrangements like that would never last realistically in real life :[ You can't love two people at the end of the day, and you have to go with what your heart tells you at the end of the day, which is why it's unfair to villainize ShiHan in this case, much as its sucks for Chul :(

In real life, I think Chul likes to bluster that hes in charge of the other two, but I do think, like you write, he depends on them more than he lets on. But he still has them as friends and of course KiBum as a fall back XD so HeeChul hwaiting!

blacksoul12012 February 17 2009, 21:37:13 UTC

I know exactly what you mean, maybe because I think the same way. A relationship between three persons can't work, because one will always be left out.

I think HeeChul appreciates them a lot, he just doesn't want to show it XD
They'll be friends forever and ever!! ♥
Kichul is underrated >___>

mardigrasmaven January 13 2009, 07:13:30 UTC

Awwww. As much as I love ShiHan, my heart hurts for Chullie. D:

blacksoul12012 February 17 2009, 21:39:10 UTC

And I feel kinda guilty for making him suffer >__>

ichigo_berry January 21 2009, 20:55:55 UTC

wow! i think that was the BEST shortest suju one i've ever read!!! love the chinese part xDDD

Those gentle touches, those sweet whispered words, you cannot understand but still feel, the light in their eyes, brighter than anything you've ever seen before. All this tells you it's over and still all you can do is to try. soo cute~ so heart-felt!! *doki, doki*

came to you one day? in a dream?! =O haha.. dreaming about suju *drool* lol, jkjk xD

blacksoul12012 February 17 2009, 21:39:52 UTC

Wow thank you so much bb ♥

I woke up and those sentences kept going around in my head. I just had to write them down XD