(Untitled)

May 01, 2008 01:54

Title: Let the World Break
Author's Name: geofount
Written For: 3goodtimes
Requested Pairing: Gin/Kira
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 4,515
Summary: Loyal to a fault.

Rather unedited so beware.

=DDDDDDDD )

april 2008

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incandescens May 1 2008, 08:40:52 UTC
Poor, poor Kira. Lovely piece.

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letainajup May 1 2008, 21:29:07 UTC
Very strong and amazing work! I luv how you wrote Kira and his relationship with his father and how it effected him in the end...

I really like the ending too, so sad but still beautiful! Great job *adds to fave*!!!

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vayshti May 4 2008, 09:48:12 UTC
I loved the fic you produced last month, and I love this just as much.

I actually like Kira after this - I usually see him as limp, but you've managed to portray him as flawed, damaged even, but nowhere near limp.

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geofount May 4 2008, 21:43:32 UTC
Honestly I see him as limp too =x

Shhhhhhh it's a secret!

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vayshti May 6 2008, 09:29:57 UTC
*lips sealed*

You do a good job of hiding your Limp!Kira views ;-).

Can't say the same here - the one time I wrote him, I kept wanting to SLAP him.

And let's not talk about Filler!Kira...

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