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Aug 01, 2005 21:37

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milkarmour August 1 2005, 13:25:15 UTC
wow thats awesome nikki, keep writing it! you are tres talented and the plot certainly hits home

much love

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nir3s August 1 2005, 13:32:33 UTC
i love it.
i read it when u e-mailed it to me.. i was just gonna wait till school to tell u the greatness of it lol
xxxx

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satanist_whore August 1 2005, 20:52:08 UTC
i love it,u should def write it. u are such a great writer and artist! ♥

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furtherdownward August 1 2005, 23:49:29 UTC
the wording is powerful, the words you use et cet., it's written well but I think it'd be better in a longer form as in the full version.
the words bring out emotion, sorrow and sadness and disgust almost and fear and rapture and concern. It's really good. Longer full form = better.

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furtherdownward August 1 2005, 23:53:29 UTC
well the amount of time I took pondering over those words and having that comment box open made me think my comment was going to be longer. man I suck.

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shatteringsound August 2 2005, 04:23:01 UTC
that's really good! you remind me so much of me in year 10, seriously.

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