the wording is powerful, the words you use et cet., it's written well but I think it'd be better in a longer form as in the full version. the words bring out emotion, sorrow and sadness and disgust almost and fear and rapture and concern. It's really good. Longer full form = better.
well the amount of time I took pondering over those words and having that comment box open made me think my comment was going to be longer. man I suck.
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i read it when u e-mailed it to me.. i was just gonna wait till school to tell u the greatness of it lol
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the words bring out emotion, sorrow and sadness and disgust almost and fear and rapture and concern. It's really good. Longer full form = better.
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