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Nov 16, 2006 13:38
Will you love me if I have green hair (
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cats2010
November 16 2006, 17:51:39 UTC
In the first paragraph "had" should be have... It would fit in better with the tenses in the other paragraph.
Other than that, bravo!
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bloody_courtz
November 16 2006, 17:53:39 UTC
TOUCHE!
it has been fixed..
(i wrote this because i was bored )
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graeme_h
November 16 2006, 22:15:41 UTC
what is love? what is it worth?
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bloody_courtz
November 16 2006, 22:18:14 UTC
iono... i was bored
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Other than that, bravo!
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it has been fixed..
(i wrote this because i was bored )
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