O hai thar, Dean- can I kick you while you're down? Yes? Awesome.

[blubird_pie]

Comments

[greeneyes_fan]

Oh, yes. Just yes. This is... This is exactly what would happen.

[blubird_pie]

Yeah, it seems like the logical outcome to me, but...man I hope I'm wrong D:

Thank you for commenting!

[zubeneschamali]

Seconded. I love the details like Dean buying stuff for the Ben of two years ago rather than the current one and Ben unknowingly trying to get the toy soldier out of the car. Heartbreaking, but so well done.

[blubird_pie]

Thank you! Something about well-intentioned gifts that fall flat just gets to me. I know there are a ton of codas floating around, so it means alot to me that you read/commented on this one <3

[jabber_moose]

Oh, the truth hurts.

I love how you wrote Ben's POV. The style fits his age.

Nice job!

[blubird_pie]

Thank you so much! I went back and forth on the POV, so it's good to know it worked in the end. (also, your icon is love :D )

[roque_clasique]

OH my god, that is so horrifically depressing. *weeps*

“Pretty cool, yeah?” he said, searching my face for whatever it was he wanted to find so bad.

POOR DEAN. And poor, poor Ben.

And this line seems so universal, so true:

I wonder if my son will look to me for more than I can give, and if I’ll be a disappointment in the end, too.

Lovely job, it was awesome to see your take on it.

[blubird_pie]

Thanks! And...yeah. That's just where my head goes with SPN and father figures! I'm hoping that s6 is a bit kinder.

I'm really pleased you liked it, thank you for the lovely comment (and the prompt <3)!

[dougalbug]

This was amazing. In a way, I really hope this is what happens.

[blubird_pie]

Well, I think it's a safe bet that Dean isn't gonna be staying with the Braedens in S6, so its either abandonment or fridging. Really, I'm being kind ;)

Thank you so much for commenting, there's a huge volume of codas for this and it makes me so happy to have someone say 'amazing,' you don't even know!