Yaaaa I was about to sleep but....NO I love this fic sooooo much !! Thanks for this chapter !! I didn't want it to end !!!But I enjoy your wrting!! Thanks a lot!! Lookng forward the following chapter^^
I love this!!! From the sexy, oblivious Kame, to the lipstick wiping, to the adrenaline rush at the stadium, to how Kame starts to feel the need for being with Jin and all that... :P
First time commenting, though I've been catching every update since, maybe, 2007? XD I honestly love your fic and every turn it takes. The angsty, confused Kame in this part of the story comes across very well, don't worry ~_- I remember when some time ago I thought I had the end figured out and was terrified at the thought of seeing it end... and then you came up with yet another unexpected turn and it's still getting more and more interesting! Now I'm just trying to block out that there are only ten more chapters to go ;_;
I hope you don't put too much stress on yourself for the fic, just continue at your own pace(like Jin XD).
Btw, how can you see a fic "too much from the writer's pov"? Really, I wonder what's getting into writer's heads nowadays! *scolds*
Hey there! ^______^/ Sorry for a late reply, but it's nice of you to drop a comment :D
Ah, that's a relief ^^ Lol, I sometimes wonder if I make any sense at all with the plot twists I create - somehow they make sense to me, but maybe I'm just weird XD; Still, I like it if I'm not totally obvious, so I'm glad I've been able to surprise you. I hope you won't see this ending coming and that you'll interest in this story will remain until the last chapter ^^ *does her best with the rest of the chapters*
XD Thank you <3
Lol, maybe I was a little unclear about that, but my point was that I feel like I can never see this fic as a reader does, because I know what is going to happen next and I have an idea of why the characters say or do certain things. Sometimes when I read through comments people surprise me, seeing a certain character or a plot twist in a way I never did. If I could get into a reader's head for a day I'd be very happy because then I could figure out how to improve this fic ^^ That was what I meant.
im so dying over this, the update was long but it was really worth waiting. anyway, i love se7en, he makes me go like goo and his lines were totally worth fawning over... jin is good, he's getting better handling his situation with kazu, im happy for him. and im hoping kazu will eventually recover from trauma *or was it?* i want to see him together with jin... poor pi, losing to jin and being teased for his manboobs...
btw, kazu's get-up make panties drop. or in jin's case make him invalid. >
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I'll try to get the next chapter out soon.
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WIII! waiting for the next one. :P
I hope Kazu will be back again to his NORMAL STATE~~XDD
tnx for this~:)
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Thank you ^^ I'll try not to make you wait for long.
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Se7en though... Don't pester Kame too much.. :(
Thanx for sharing~
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Kame should just always stay by Jin's side so he'd never run into Se7en alone. ^^ Is that a good theory?
Thank you ^_____^
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I honestly love your fic and every turn it takes. The angsty, confused Kame in this part of the story comes across very well, don't worry ~_- I remember when some time ago I thought I had the end figured out and was terrified at the thought of seeing it end... and then you came up with yet another unexpected turn and it's still getting more and more interesting! Now I'm just trying to block out that there are only ten more chapters to go ;_;
I hope you don't put too much stress on yourself for the fic, just continue at your own pace(like Jin XD).
Btw, how can you see a fic "too much from the writer's pov"? Really, I wonder what's getting into writer's heads nowadays! *scolds*
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Ah, that's a relief ^^ Lol, I sometimes wonder if I make any sense at all with the plot twists I create - somehow they make sense to me, but maybe I'm just weird XD; Still, I like it if I'm not totally obvious, so I'm glad I've been able to surprise you. I hope you won't see this ending coming and that you'll interest in this story will remain until the last chapter ^^ *does her best with the rest of the chapters*
XD Thank you <3
Lol, maybe I was a little unclear about that, but my point was that I feel like I can never see this fic as a reader does, because I know what is going to happen next and I have an idea of why the characters say or do certain things. Sometimes when I read through comments people surprise me, seeing a certain character or a plot twist in a way I never did. If I could get into a reader's head for a day I'd be very happy because then I could figure out how to improve this fic ^^ That was what I meant.
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im so dying over this, the update was long but it was really worth waiting.
anyway, i love se7en, he makes me go like goo and his lines were totally worth fawning over...
jin is good, he's getting better handling his situation with kazu, im happy for him.
and im hoping kazu will eventually recover from trauma *or was it?*
i want to see him together with jin...
poor pi, losing to jin and being teased for his manboobs...
btw, kazu's get-up make panties drop.
or in jin's case make him invalid.
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Jin is doing all right for now ^^ Though Kame shouldn't dress up like that, otherwise Jin might not do as well.
Yes, it's a trauma of a kind. Something he pushed away for a long time and never dealt with.
I feel so sorry for Pi when he was teased in Buzzer Beat too about his man boobs XDD *huggles poor boy*
XD True! I had LIPS!Kame in mind. He had me falling off the chair when I saw that PV for the first time~
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