WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVENsou_kiriJuly 30 2010, 11:33:04 UTC
You'll get your enormous flail comment later XD I'm working on it ♥ I've almost recovered enough to read it again and pick back up the comment where I left off. But as I'm still fairly sensible at the moment, I love and wasn't that bothered by the part you thought I wouldn't like xD the way that what happens with them is so intense and like.. it is the main plot, but there's constant reminders that however bad it gets, it's all ok really 83; And that's all I can say without going into detail of every single thing I love about it x3;
Re: WHAT IS THIS I DON'T EVENbluebirdsongsJuly 30 2010, 11:48:27 UTC
x33 'm so glad you liked it~ Gah, I'm almost too tired to be responding to fic comments, right now, but...xD; Mm, I dunno if the rising and falling action/sense of danger was intentional or more an indirect result of how I wrote the fic, but if you liked it, then hey...83; <3
Very much looking forward to your flaily comment. 8D And your art. <3 Guh, I can't tell you how happy I am that I could give this to you and make you happy~ <3
Re: WHAT IS THIS I DONT EVENsou_kiriAugust 4 2010, 18:51:55 UTC
..here is your monster comment. Though having just read eragon22's comment, mine seems so.. unorganized, in comparison xD; Lets see how many comments this will take.. I've written fics shorter than this comment D8
I'm one paragraph in and totally in love with you ;3; Seeing as I didn't know when this would end up as a LJ comment, I'm trying to do it in a notepad as I go.. which could end up enormous, because Jin tripping on his apron string ♥ AND THAT HE'S EVEN IN THE CAFE. I think I knew that anyway, but that doesn't take any awesome away from it ;n; And yes Kame's nose is a bitch to draw D8 I sympathize. , instead of grabbing Jin by the throat or pinning him to the table all good options xD I just fff have no words for how much I love Kame's scary aura going completely unnoticed by Jin and him going along with what Jin's doing
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xDD Yeah, I have a feeling I'm going to have the same problem when I go to comment on your fic~ Thanks for the effort, though. x3 It's very much appreciated. <3
8D Thank you. Nounou said the way I portrayed Jin was wonderful, so my doubts on that are very quickly fading. x3 'm so glad~
Guh, yes, details. I was too lazy to do all the research that you do for your fics, but I tried. ^^;
All of that is exactly what I was going for with Sachiko. x3 Lol, a lot of the time with her, I was writing from direct experience, so she should seem pretty relatable. xD I'm very glad she comes across well.
Lol, all of that thanks to your input. Their development wouldn't have been half as good if you hadn't been there to advise me on it.
x3 Thank you. For everything. I'm going to let out a huge sigh of relief now~ <3
gaaaaaaaahh!!! THIS IS AWESOMELY MADE!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ i don't know what to say more because i'm sleepy here... just so you know, you're awesome with this whole yakuza thing! and thanks for sharing... zzzzzzzz
x3 Thank you! There are a lot of parts in this fic I struggled with, so hearing that it paid off is just awesome. Thank you so much! Oh, and go get some sleep! xD
this was one hell of a complex story and i am really surprised by how you put it together i mean..i sure thought her imagination was real until the last part...so jin was still in control..huh? but what was with the tiara thing, anyway? it was full of details and everything came together perfectly i suppose i can relate to Sachiko because i think we fangirls do about the same. heck..i can..if i'd see people like that somewhere..i would imagine what happened too.
kinda cool... jin and kame having their own roles and going for a live play if only they would have gone for being hentai in public
Replying about the tiara, because this Jin is mine and that's my fault 83; Which is basically that he's a princess and likes sparkly things (namely diamonds), and after thinking he'd need a tiara to fit in with the girls at the cafe, he then was taken with the idea and whined at Kame until he got one 8D;
xD Haha, I don't know if it can really be said that Jin's in control. In the last scene, where it's revealed Kame isn't in the yakuza, and in our RP, Jin's still submissive to Kame. That's just how sou_kiri and I tend to see him~ ^^;
And lol, yeah, I definitely related to Sachiko at times, too, because she does have part of us fangirls in her. Lol, I think it might be because of that that she ended up being so fun to write...xD
Haha, I think poor Sachiko would have died of blood loss had that happened. Lol, and thinking about it kinda makes me want to write exhibitionist!Akame. xD Hmm...
But anyway~ I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it. x3 Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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I've almost recovered enough to read it again and pick back up the comment where I left off. But as I'm still fairly sensible at the moment, I love and wasn't that bothered by the part you thought I wouldn't like xD the way that what happens with them is so intense and like.. it is the main plot, but there's constant reminders that however bad it gets, it's all ok really 83;
And that's all I can say without going into detail of every single thing I love about it x3;
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Very much looking forward to your flaily comment. 8D And your art. <3 Guh, I can't tell you how happy I am that I could give this to you and make you happy~ <3
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Lets see how many comments this will take.. I've written fics shorter than this comment D8
I'm one paragraph in and totally in love with you ;3; Seeing as I didn't know when this would end up as a LJ comment, I'm trying to do it in a notepad as I go.. which could end up enormous, because Jin tripping on his apron string ♥ AND THAT HE'S EVEN IN THE CAFE. I think I knew that anyway, but that doesn't take any awesome away from it ;n;
And yes Kame's nose is a bitch to draw D8 I sympathize.
, instead of grabbing Jin by the throat or pinning him to the table all good options xD I just fff have no words for how much I love Kame's scary aura going completely unnoticed by Jin and him going along with what Jin's doing ( ... )
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8D Thank you. Nounou said the way I portrayed Jin was wonderful, so my doubts on that are very quickly fading. x3 'm so glad~
Guh, yes, details. I was too lazy to do all the research that you do for your fics, but I tried. ^^;
All of that is exactly what I was going for with Sachiko. x3 Lol, a lot of the time with her, I was writing from direct experience, so she should seem pretty relatable. xD I'm very glad she comes across well.
Lol, all of that thanks to your input. Their development wouldn't have been half as good if you hadn't been there to advise me on it.
x3 Thank you. For everything. I'm going to let out a huge sigh of relief now~ <3
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i don't know what to say more because i'm sleepy here...
just so you know, you're awesome with this whole yakuza thing!
and thanks for sharing... zzzzzzzz
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:)
thank you for sharing...
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i mean..i sure thought her imagination was real until the last part...so jin was still in control..huh?
but what was with the tiara thing, anyway?
it was full of details and everything came together perfectly
i suppose i can relate to Sachiko because i think we fangirls do about the same.
heck..i can..if i'd see people like that somewhere..i would imagine what happened too.
kinda cool... jin and kame having their own roles and going for a live play
if only they would have gone for being hentai in public
thanks for sharing!
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And lol, yeah, I definitely related to Sachiko at times, too, because she does have part of us fangirls in her. Lol, I think it might be because of that that she ended up being so fun to write...xD
Haha, I think poor Sachiko would have died of blood loss had that happened. Lol, and thinking about it kinda makes me want to write exhibitionist!Akame. xD Hmm...
But anyway~ I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it. x3 Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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