To be, you can only be with one Ch 16

Nov 15, 2009 22:07

Title: To be, you can only be with one Ch 16 ( Read more... )

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girlechick November 15 2009, 12:06:53 UTC
....Erm...I...You seemed to have rendered me speechless...great chapter bluechicki!

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 05:06:45 UTC
Aww...girlechicky, i'm sorry to leave you speechless....:(
Thanks for your comments :DD

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trogg98 November 15 2009, 13:39:53 UTC
wow great chapter cant wait for next one!

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:47:48 UTC
Thanks for commenting trogg. Glad you enjoyed :D

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pepsilove64 November 15 2009, 13:40:22 UTC
Yes, you left me speechless too
I knew you were going to leave it there
But it's a great chapter, thanks for updating

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 05:12:53 UTC
Hmmm.... i had to leave it there pepsilove :( the chapter was getting so looooong and i wanted to get it posted.
I'm sorry to leave you speechless too, seems to be catchy *smiles* ....Thanks for your comments :D

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slayergirl13 November 15 2009, 15:59:58 UTC
That was wicked!!!!
I can't wait for more :)

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 05:14:16 UTC
Thanks for your comment slayergirl, short and sweet....love it! i am hoping more soon :DD

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kiarcheo November 15 2009, 16:41:33 UTC
Just fantastic!
I love how Maca is such a good friend and how little Mar already like Silvia (who wouldn't like her, anyway?)
and Pepa keeping their ring...
can't wait for the next chapter

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:45:45 UTC
Mar is the offspring of Pepa so i figure if she takes after her mommy at all....she would instantly like Silvia....i totally agree with you though *who wouldn't like her anyway*!!! :DD
Thanks for your comments kiarcheo. Glad you are still enjoying....and working on more soon :D

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