To be, you can only be with one Ch 16

Nov 15, 2009 22:07

Title: To be, you can only be with one Ch 16 ( Read more... )

fanfiction: to be you can only be with o, fanfiction, pepa y silvia

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av8rwinn November 15 2009, 17:57:07 UTC
Beautiful. Wow.

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:39:39 UTC
Thanks for your comment av8rwinn, short and sweet :DD

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calleighsgirl November 15 2009, 20:44:03 UTC
*sighs* I just melted. :)

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:13:36 UTC
Awww...calleighsgirl, *big smile* thanks :D

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pantherwalks November 15 2009, 21:26:26 UTC
Awww....i don't know what to say, except it's really wonderful.
Looking forward for the next chapter. :)

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:12:36 UTC
Hey pantherwalks :D
Awww...thanks for you comments and continuing to read and enjoy *smiles*
More soon as i am able :DD

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swiftlyreloaded November 15 2009, 22:48:02 UTC
ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!!!

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 06:07:45 UTC
Thanks for your comment swiftly. Glad you're still enjoying :DD

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qosmio18 November 15 2009, 23:11:29 UTC
BLUE! OMG. You have a way to make me cry of both happiness and sadness. Hold me! Give me one of those glorious hugs. I swear you have a PHD in hugs because they work like magic. The same goes with your writing.

Mar was just toooo adorable. Ohh while cupping my heart. Maca what a good...no no no great friend.

And the sexy time. You know what mama likes. ;p I just get chills thinking the next might....gasp...should I say out...no mustn't jinx it but maybe a sound.. Buh chika wah wah! Tehehehehe I'm getting all excited. I don't know if it because I might get one of those magic hugs or next chapter will be...hehehe. Great chapter as always guapa!

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bluechicki November 16 2009, 05:38:53 UTC
Awww...qos, honey...*runs over with my arms outstretched and draws you into a huge hug* i don't know if it worked like magic but i feel better *grins*
I'm sorry I didn't want you to cry again *pouts*.....in happiness is ok but sadness, no, no! *rubbing my hands up and down your back* what can i do?
Ok so I just don't know what to do next qos, *grinning cheekily* skip over the sexy time and get on with the story or write about it then get on with the story hmmmm.... what do you think guapa??? ...lol :D

Yeah i think Mar is adorable too....especially being Pepa's offspring, and if she takes after Pepa at all well....nuff said :DD and everyone should have at least one friend like Maca *smiles*

Oh qos, honey um in order for me to write more i'm gonna need you to let me go though, even though i could stand here all day in your embrace :DD..
Thanks for your comments guapa...I love em, you ALWAYS make me smile xD

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qosmio18 November 16 2009, 21:49:41 UTC
Umm ok. Sighs Takes deep breath and breathes you in. :D Hmm magic. You have a gift.

As for what you should do...hmmm..whatever you decide will be great. I do love the sexy time but I also love how this story is unfolding. So work your magic. I always have my imagination on sexy time between those two. : )

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bluechicki November 17 2009, 06:58:57 UTC
*deep sigh* So that's it then qos, you're just going to let go....even without a fight...a little tiny one even, *pouts* ok then...*squeezes you tight then let's go too*....so i guess it's off to write i go...:DD

*I always have my imagination on sexy time between those two. : )* si, me too guapa...me and my imagined sexy time with those two would be very happy together *cheeky grin*
btw i thought for sure you'd want sexy time....i was putting the question out there already kinda knowing your answer but bam....you surprised me honey :DD

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