To be, you can only be with one Ch 16

Nov 15, 2009 22:07

Title: To be, you can only be with one Ch 16 ( Read more... )

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foot_print_1 November 16 2009, 13:56:09 UTC
YAY! Update!
Talk about a cool chapter! This one surpasses all my expectations! It was absolutely WONDERFUL!
From beginning to end! The Maca/Pepa conversation, the sexy shower! It was all so divine.
This story makes my heart warm every time I read it. I think this is what you're aiming and so expertly achieving! You can feel the PepSi love ;)

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bluechicki November 17 2009, 06:51:11 UTC
Wow, surpasses expectations *blushes* thanks foot_print for your wonderful comments :D. I am aiming to warm the heart and show the love of these two lovely ladies and i am really happy that it's coming across that way *big smiles*

btw AWESOME pic :DD

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foot_print_1 November 17 2009, 13:36:03 UTC
I really like it too! Kristin Chenoweth's cuteness knows no limits ;)

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lovelyafterglow November 16 2009, 18:25:34 UTC
Aww...what an absolutely lovely (and long!) update. I love the tenderness between these two...and I also love how supportive Maca is as a friend. Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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bluechicki November 17 2009, 06:31:03 UTC
Awww....thanks lovely....i'm so glad you are still enjoying...and commenting too *smiles*

How are you going with your inspiration hun? I can't wait for the next chappy of your story either *hint, hint* ...:D

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lovelyafterglow November 17 2009, 21:42:57 UTC
You're quite welcome. :-D

Uhm, I don't want to make any guarantees, but I'm shooting for having the next chapter posted this week. *crosses fingers*

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silviaslabcoat November 16 2009, 20:00:39 UTC
Well I'm not sure where to start babe.....GREAT chappy no that doesn't cover it!!!.....Sweet, Sexy, Hot, Loving, Caring, Cute and I could go on but I am kind of having trouble finding the words after that SEXY SHOWER scene!!!

After a scene like that one I think I need to take a shower....*want to join me*?? :P

I can't wait for the next chapter babe hopefully you will give us more sweet lovin *hint hint*

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bluechicki November 17 2009, 05:09:15 UTC
Well babe, it's pretty hot today here, maybe i need a shower too.....if we happen to be taking one at the same time.....Hmmm...i wouldn't mind that....:P
Ok, so i'm still not sure about the sweet lovin (the smut you are undoubtedly talking about anyway) ...we will see :DD
I'm glad you are still enjoying and thanks for your comments babe *wink*

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silviaslabcoat November 19 2009, 06:07:44 UTC
So it was hot here again today babe so I'm about to have a shower and since I'm taking one in ur shower maybe u could join me??

And teasing us with sexy time aye thats not a very nice thing to do you know!!!

Oh by the way the water is running now so if u want that shower u need to hurry!!

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bluechicki November 17 2009, 05:04:57 UTC
lol...yeah maybe i should, i fixed that annoying *carino* thing now spanish...thankyou for reminding me :D
.... that was driving me nuts and wouldn't go away when i posted it *pouts*
Anyway thanks for your comments, i still reckon everyone should have at least one friend like Maca *smiles*
Glad you are still enjoying...more in the next few days :DD

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supercontenta November 18 2009, 10:26:48 UTC
I finally got to read this chapter and it was awesome sauce! As usual. Sweet, tender, loving, wonderfulness. *happy sigh*

Now, I read other comments and I just have to put in my two cents regarding your next installment - Here is one definitive vote for sexy time. There. I said it. I want it. I need it.

Here's the thing...I've been sitting here reading this beautiful fic and loving every minute of it. All the while I've been waiting for these two crazy cats to be alone together because hot damn! - 5 years is a long ass time! I will be sad if I miss out on their first time as wife and wife.

That's just this little lady's opinion. And if you decide to write something else then I'll understand completely. It's your fic, and I won't hold it against you, blue. I'll keep reading no matter what.

But maybe I'll cry a tear. Just one single tear in honor of what happened in that bedroom that's just waiting on the other side of the threshold...

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bluechicki November 19 2009, 05:55:38 UTC
Awww...supes, i don't want you crying ANY tears...
The comments *hangs head and smiles shyly* I was just stirring qos and slc....after all i've put the two lovely ladies through in this story do you really think i would pass up on the chance to write sexy time after a 5 year absence and.... for the first time as wife and wife to boot.....Hell no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Here is one definitive vote for sexy time. There. I said it. I want it. I need it.* You got it hun... and feel free to tell me your two cents any time you want :DD
I am working on said sexy time, a few days supes.....and thank you for your continued encouragement of this little fic of mine :DD

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supercontenta November 19 2009, 20:30:49 UTC
*happy dance, happy dance, HUGE GRIN*

This is very happy news. I'm glad we both see it the same way - you can't pass up on this opportunity after an absence of 5 years! It wouldn't be Christian!!

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