Comments | bluechicki: To be, you can only be with one Ch 16

bluechicki

To be, you can only be with one Ch 16

Nov 15, 2009 22:07

Title: To be, you can only be with one Ch 16 ( Read more... )

fanfiction: to be you can only be with o, fanfiction, pepa y silvia

Comments 42

junebuggy01 November 21 2009, 08:34:02 UTC

Great chapter Chicki! I'm sorry it took my sweet ass so long to comment though. xD I loved it. It was all cute at the beginning and then became very hot! *Waggles eyebrows* Very hot indeed! Though... Why'd you end it there?! *Sighs* You better update soon! xD

bluechicki November 29 2009, 09:46:29 UTC

Sorry juney, now i took my sweet ass time to reply. i was capped and couldn't reply till now. No net for a week i was pulling my hair out :DD
Anyway, don't worry about taking your *sweet ass* so long to comment(and i'm sure it is a sweet ass guapa *wink*)i am just glad that you did.
Why'd i end it there? Did you notice how long it become honey....but the next one is done, has been done for a bit but i couldn't post *grrrr*......anyway hope you approve *grins*
Thanks for your comments juney

dossemanas November 21 2009, 17:29:12 UTC

could this story get any sweeter??? i love how long your chapters are. i love how you take your time with all the characters. the maca convo was beautiful, and pepa's insecurities very believable.

bedtime with silvia sleeping = magic

and showertime with silvia was mesmerizing. i could have read that for pages and pages. i just felt so happy for them both! can't wait for the next part. ay yi yi!!

bluechicki November 29 2009, 09:57:19 UTC

Sorry dos for not reply till now. I'm happy to see you are still reading and enjoy my little fic.
*bedtime with silvia sleeping = magic*- si i agree, i loved writing that bit :D
Well i have posted the next chappy ....i had a bit of a delay with my net being capped *grrr...*
Thanks for you comments dos and hope you enjoy the next one too :D