Comments | blueraccoon: FIC: Trajectory (2/2)

blueraccoon

FIC: Trajectory (2/2)

Mar 02, 2006 23:27

geometry, joshua/stephen, trajectory, ncis fic, kink

Comments 33

ozziebabe March 3 2006, 14:41:09 UTC

This is really working for me. I didn't think I could get past Tony not being with Gibbs or Abby or both *g* But David rocks my world. He is what Tony needs at this point. Someone gentle enough to give him the time he needs to sort out what he really wants and to overcome his fears for that longing. As always I love Joshua and Stephen. I like the little glimpses into their lives. The dancing was so damn hot between these two.

The hot was perfect and so damn hot.

Wouldn't mind seeing what Abs gets up to either *wink*

So, need a smoke and cold drink. Need to mop up the drool.

Yeah, love it, love you.

More please?

blueraccoon March 4 2006, 00:20:54 UTC

*bows* thank you so much. I'm getting to Tony/Gibbs eventually, I promise. Just not quite yet. You're exactly right--David is what Tony needs right now. He's laid-back enough to go at Tony's comfort level and not push it.

So by the time Tony ends up with Gibbs, he'll be all set :D

pigglet27 March 3 2006, 16:02:23 UTC

Oh my. This was great! I just love that last exchange.

A moment later, David laughed. "So, was it good for you?"

Tony hit him with a pillow.

Perfect way to end this!

blueraccoon March 4 2006, 00:21:34 UTC

*dances* that's one of my favorite bits in the story and I'm so glad you liked it!

pixie_hollow March 3 2006, 21:06:38 UTC

Okay, this series is my favorite of yours. I adore the development of Tony's character, and Abs is always cool. AND OMG DAVID IS SO COOL!

blueraccoon March 4 2006, 00:22:27 UTC

thank you so much :D I like David too.

adafrog March 4 2006, 00:34:12 UTC

OMGOMGOMGOMG Wow. And, um, perfect. You do a great job of making me feel like we are right there with Tony. Thanks.

blueraccoon March 5 2006, 07:44:01 UTC

:) thank you so much!

_minxy_ March 4 2006, 16:10:39 UTC

Wow. Here on dustandroses recommendation and wow, she wasn't wrong. This is one of my first NCIS fics to read and it's a marvelous one. The characterization of Abby is so amazing (I want her outfit. Hell, I want to BE Abby) and Tony and Joshua and Stephen and David... The little moments where Tony slips into those submissive places were incredible, and in the bedroom when the odd command was given and obeyed it was possibly one of the hottest things ever. I'm *so* going to be following Geometry now. *mumbles 'like I needed another fandom...'*

*g* Thanks, I enjoyed this a lot.

blueraccoon March 5 2006, 07:46:01 UTC

Don't we all want to be Abby? *g* Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. You can find the rest of the series at http://blueraccoon.livejournal.com/tag/geometry. All my fics are tagged, although I'm a little behind on memorying them. And if you're interested in other recs or authors, let me know :)