*melts* OMG, WOW. That was just, WOW. I love David. He's a great character and perfect guy to lead Tony slowly into that lifestyle. Loved the club scene. The power play was hilarious and Stephen and Joshua are SOOOOOOOOO HOT. Abby was too funny and damn, what an outfit :) Tony and David are so hot together. Your imagery and description, it's like I'm really there with them. So loving this series. Cannot wait for more :) Awesome job Rebecca! And the last line? Classic Tony reaction. Hee.
LOL. Very appropiate. And heh, your characters are very three-dimensional. I love it. David, Stephen and Joshua are walking contradictions. It's great. *g* More please :)
I know I had good intentions about leaving comments in the wee hours of yesterday morning, but I don't think I did. So what I was going to say was I love this. You start with a hot Abby, follow with hot dancing, give us some hot boys and girls as original characters, and just when it can't get any hotter, you give us some August-with-no-air-conditioner-living-in-the-south hot sex. You turned my brain to mush long before the 36 hours of Awake could finish the job, and I still don't have smart, pithy things to say about it, just... whoa and hot and thank you and please, mistress, can we have some more?
*giggling* would you like some ice cream? or ice water? thank you! so glad you liked :D and there'll be more. i think. maybe.
although you gave me that germ of an idea for another story and now that one's adding itself to the "works in progress" list and saying "write me! write me!" so we'll have to see...
gulping down ice water by the gallon, although i think an artic swim might be in store.
although you gave me that germ of an idea for another story
you're so good at shifting blame, but i'll take it as a form of flattery. and you said you wanted to be writing that. not my fault.
although if you're listening to the crack!Muse of "his hott throbbing rod penetrating her delicate flower fo womanhood!!" instead, i'll totally accept blame as the angry villagers of fandom chase us away with large stones and rotten tomatoes and a pack of vicious Corgis.
also, a tiny, pitiful request because i think you'll do it justice somewhere. can abby wear silk stockings somewhere in your vast world of fic and kink? you can say no, really, and it won't break my heart, but...
Great second part of the story. I'm really enjoying Tony's slow exploration and how careful David's being. Tony might be a natural sub, but I can totally see that it would be hard for him to give up control of his conscious mind, being so used to having his control.
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I couldn't resist the ending. It just seemed so...appropriate. You know?
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*smooch*
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although you gave me that germ of an idea for another story and now that one's adding itself to the "works in progress" list and saying "write me! write me!" so we'll have to see...
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although you gave me that germ of an idea for another story
you're so good at shifting blame, but i'll take it as a form of flattery. and you said you wanted to be writing that. not my fault.
although if you're listening to the crack!Muse of "his hott throbbing rod penetrating her delicate flower fo womanhood!!" instead, i'll totally accept blame as the angry villagers of fandom chase us away with large stones and rotten tomatoes and a pack of vicious Corgis.
also, a tiny, pitiful request because i think you'll do it justice somewhere. can abby wear silk stockings somewhere in your vast world of fic and kink? you can say no, really, and it won't break my heart, but...
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(I would have commented sooner but had R/L stuff interrupt.)
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Great second part of the story. I'm really enjoying Tony's slow exploration and how careful David's being. Tony might be a natural sub, but I can totally see that it would be hard for him to give up control of his conscious mind, being so used to having his control.
Laura.
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