SCI: What's Missing?

[bombardiette]

"Why the long face, cutie?" Matthew walked...no...snuck up behind me on that fateful day. I remember staring out as the waves broke gently over shell-less, rock-less, life-less sand, trying not to cry

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[bombardiette]

And here, this was more than that. So much more...

[bombardiette]

♥

[myrna_bird]

Lovely descriptions of the salt and spray ocean air.

[bombardiette]

Thank you. :)

[dangerous_beans]

I've only heard this lament for home from people who live in New England, the Maritimes or Newfoundland...

For me, it's my beloved Green Mountains and the Taconics and being nestled safe, snug. Wrapped in a geologic grand-mère's embrace... The Rockies are pretty and they're nice to visit, but they're too damn young. They're wild and rebellious teenage mountains that haven't weathered through even half an eon.

One of my favourite, favourite song lyrics is:
My thoughts are always with you,
Have you changed since I've been gone?
O how I long to see you,
the time has been so long.
If I could get just one more day to walk your rugged shores,
I'd trade the life I chose to live, and go to sea no more.My stoic and hard husband, expresses heartbreak at this song

[bombardiette]

I think, too, that it was more a lament for everything lost.

Your descriptions of your home and the place where you live, the vast differences...they're beautiful too.

[bombardiette]

:) Thank you. It was a bit heartwrenching to write given that it's a true moment in time.

[basric]

Very intense. And well written.

[bombardiette]

Thank you very much. :)