Please, don't leave me

[boogie14]

 [fic] Please, don't leave me
onkey  | romance/angst | 1133 w | G
An unfortunate event left Kibum in a deep slumber
This is for owlbee , unnie i miss you so much ;A; thanks for the beautiful b-day message.

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[boogie14]

spot for owlbee
i love you unnie♥

[owlbee]

why you so sweet like this ;__; i'm the one who suppose to give you a gift since you're the birthday girl, yknow. ack. but ofc, i love you more bellie! to itty bitty pieces! :D

and so, this...
oh god my heart. jkfh ♥♥ it tugged on quite a few heartstrings /wibble
with tone of jinki's desperation and longing here mingled with his unconditional love, what a bittersweet story. ugh. the part where jinki talk about how he already fixed the wii and bits about jongtaemin also miss and need kibum, it got me bad ;__;

this was so sad, but really, it made me smile more than it made me tear up. and i must be really weird, because as much as i want kibum to wake up and everything turn out all sunshine-happy-cherry-merry-fluffy again, idk why but i keep have this image in my mind that kibum never wake up till they grow old and yet jinki is still there for him. keep on loving him and pretending that they have all time in the world akljshfgkl /cries why i like to torture myself like this, argh

anw, i was reading this while listening to 'feeling

[boogie14]

BEE UNNIEEEEE!!! *runs and tackles you down*

-here we go again-
i've told you thousands of times that you can't possibly love me more than i love you, becuase my love for you has no ends.♥

i actually had the same emotions as you while writing it. It was sad, yes, Kibummie is in a coma and is likely that he won't wake up, yes, but what i wanted to portrayed more was how endless and out-of-this-word is Jinki's love for him. How he keeps talking to him eagerly and making him remember their times together in hope that he is listening to him and enjoying all their stories together.
my hands are itching to write an ending like that but i feel people will read bricks at me. ;A;i'd probably end up crying endlessly while writing it

omo! *wipes your tears* i hope you still watched those cartoons and enjoyed your bowls froyo!

lol, it's okay, it was more than sweet unnie! >u<
loveyoumore ♥♥♥ *huuuuuuuuuuug*

[owlbee]

b-but but belliee.....

[boogie14]

Spot for bree_nd have i told you i love you tons unnie?

[bree_nd]

Lol, thanks for the spot sweetie~ I love you tons too!
And I'm so so so sorry that I reeditted it!
You don't have to repost if you don't want to!
Am I allowed to demand a sequel? XD

[boogie14]

*clings*
it's okay i already reposted it! C: i want it to be perfeect so it's fiine! C:, thanks again unnie♥

s-sequel? uh..i guess i could give it a try...

[bree_nd]

You're so sweet~ /huggles
I'm supposed to edit mine... Forgot to centralise the *** and bold and italics and all that stuff. But I'm just too lazy. XD
Haha, it's not a must, bb~ You don't have to force yourself. XD

[belintuchiha]

YOU BETTER MAKE A SEQUEL WHERE KEY WAKES UP
OR IMMA GO IN A COMMA TOO XD

[boogie14]

lol, even if i'm not good at writing sequels i'll give it a try! >u<)9

thanks for reading and commentin

[volatileflame]

aww~ the poor dears ;^;

[boogie14]

ikr~ ;A;

thanks for reading and commenting! C:

[boogie14]

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thank you for your beautiful words! ;A; *hugs*

i don't like angst that much either, i try to avoid it as much as i can as i tend to cry easily with angsty sotries, but ...i don't know...it just flowed..
thank you.

thanks for reading and commenting! C: