Fire and Ice - Chapter 29

[booklovergirl]

Jack makes a new friend.

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Setting: AU/AU

Rating: NC-17 for the whole story

Disclaimer: The characters of Ennis and Jack belong to the fabulously talented Annie Proulx. No disrespect is intended. Any OCs are mine.

Summary: Ennis del Mar is a defenseman and Jack Twist a left wing on a minor-league hockey team who meet when Ennis is

Comments

[madbottoms]

Oh my! Jack is hurting so bad and it's all Ennis' fault. I don't blame Jack for seeking comfort when it is offered and this Brady fella seems like a nice bloke. Too bad he could never compete against Ennis.

Can't wait for the next update.

Hugs

Sandy

[trekfan]

oh Ennis screwed this up big time! I hope these two can fix things. And I wonder if Ennis is going to find out about Brady

Hurry up and call Jack Ennis!

more please

[fizzerbass]

Cool! I didn't expect to see this up so soon - or Jack either, for that matter. :) You did a great job of getting into Jack's head (snerk) and letting us see the turmoil he's been living with for the past two months. I just hate that what happened, happened.

I get that Jack's upset and I understand he's ego just needs to give a big-ol' "Fuck You" to Ennis, but I'm thinking that his "fuck you" turned into an, "oh, fuck me" when he realized just how screwed he is without Ennis in his life. Please, oh please, say that Brady was just a one-shot thing...

Oh, and by the way, this was just beautiful:

Without batting an eye, the driver pulled away from the curb, leaving Jack’s heart behind at the hotel.

Does this mean Ch30 will be up tomorrow? :)

Thanks, darlin.
XO Fizzer

[midget_size]

NO, Jack! Argh. Stupid men and their stupid wanting to forget and their stupid hook ups and stupid stupid!

Whew. Okay, that's out of my system. So now Ennis will call Jack and they'll talk and forgive each other and be happy together. Right? :)

[eandj]

I think Jack has done the right thing. He can't wait forever for Ennis.
This is on Ennis own hat and he has to deal with it.
Really fabulous writing ladies
Paula