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Fire and Ice - Chapter 32

May 18, 2008 22:52

The first part of this chapter was supposed to be the end of the previous chapter, but LJ said it was too long.

Also…this chapter was too long too, so I will continue it in chapter 33.

A few days later…

Jack awoke with a smile on his face, as he had every day since Ennis had called him. Today was going to be the best day in months: today was ( Read more... )

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bbmbeliever May 19 2008, 03:27:01 UTC

YAY for the update! I hope Brady's anger does not translate into physical violence. Ennis's knee is fucked up enough. I love that Ennis surprised Jack. I wonder if they will out themselves at the rink tonight, intentionally or not. I think Todd needs to be removed from the picture. I dont like his anger issues. He could arrive with a gun one day and take everybody out. Bitter little bastard.

midget_size May 19 2008, 03:33:53 UTC

Ahh! So much going on. Jack and Ennis being happy to see each other, Todd being hateful, Brady getting jealous and upset--I hope he and Todd don't find each other and come up with something.

techequeen May 19 2008, 04:34:29 UTC

Wow! I sure hope Brady doesn't try to do anything to Ennis. That would really suck. Then of course there's Todd, the little shit. Donna

Fire And Ice Chapter 32 bmshirts May 19 2008, 04:35:29 UTC

Oh Boy!!! Ennis is back and Jack's ecstatic! Todd's been found out as the homophobe who taped the hate message to Ennis' locker. Brady's about to be dumped big time by Jack. I hope he follows Jack home and sees Ennis go in the house with Jack. I smell trouble from both Todd and Brady. It's time for Jack to retire from hockey, for him and Ennis to come out and for them to start whatever lives they want together.
I hope Jack tells Brady off right in front of Ennis so Ennis will know he has nothing to fear from Brady, that Brady was nothing more than a fill-in for Ennis.
Todd hopefully will be fired from the team.
Thanks. Carole

acquaalta May 19 2008, 05:58:12 UTC

Wow, some unexpected turns in this chapter!!
Ennis being back and wanting to come to the game, and then knowing Brady was there wanting to meet up with Jack I feared Ennis would walk in on them.
It now being the other way around is interesting.
I somehow doubt Todd is taking any further steps to go into public at the moment but I think Brady would be up to it.
And I suppose during all their talk Jack just didn't mention Brady to Ennis. He really should soon.
Who knows what might happen otherwise ...

Thank you so much for the update, all the best, B.