Believe me, Part 2

Sep 19, 2011 00:54


Anthony flipped them around on the bed, without breaking the kiss. He lay heavily on top of Ian, slowly grinding their hips together and kissing him with a passion he barely knew he had inside him. Anthony wasn’t sure why, but he felt an urge to protect Ian, to save him from his internal demons. The thought of Ian never being himself again was ( Read more... )

believe me, monthly challenge: first kiss, slash, nc-17, smosh

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gothic_shoujo September 19 2011, 00:48:02 UTC
Ho-ly crap!

That was hot, and smexy. But above all, it was ridiculously sweet and genuine. <33 And I love your writing. It was the perfect length for me; not too long, but not at all short either. Yet it covered everything perfectly.

I loved it! Kudos. ^_^

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boredomdelux September 19 2011, 18:24:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I wondered if I had way too many details in there, so I'm glad you thought it was a good length ;D

So happy you liked it<3

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michaelangelo24 September 19 2011, 00:58:22 UTC
My legs are sore from having to cross my legs while reading this very steamy story. ;) You did an excellent job with detail and even the emotional aspect of the story. Honestly, that was one of the best fics I've read on this site. Now you're obligated to keep writing such amazing fanfics. :D

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boredomdelux September 19 2011, 18:25:36 UTC
Hahahaha, this made my day XD So glad you liked it :))
And we'll see, it was fun writing, so maybe I'll do some more someday ;)

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smoshslashbabe September 19 2011, 01:50:31 UTC
damn! That was soo fucking sexy haha I really really enjoyed it!!!

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boredomdelux September 19 2011, 18:26:04 UTC
*squeal* Yay! :D Thanks for reading :))

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boredomdelux September 19 2011, 18:28:03 UTC
I kinda always got the feeling he wasn't too happy with his looks, since he's saying that he's ugly. But we all know, he's firetrucking sexy as hell, as you say ;)

I'm so happy you liked it! :D And aww, don't cry, everything's okay now<3

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louiselecaca September 19 2011, 17:29:28 UTC
I totally agree with michaelangelo24 =)
It was amazing and incredibly sexy and cute.
Thanks for this =D

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boredomdelux September 19 2011, 18:28:58 UTC
You're so very welcome! :D
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)))

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