Believe me, Part 2

[boredomdelux]

Anthony flipped them around on the bed, without breaking the kiss. He lay heavily on top of Ian, slowly grinding their hips together and kissing him with a passion he barely knew he had inside him. Anthony wasn’t sure why, but he felt an urge to protect Ian, to save him from his internal demons. The thought of Ian never being himself again was

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[hvnlyumbrlla]

Holy fucking shit (sorry for the language, but its necessary xD). This was perfect! So far, one of my favorite smosh fan fics ever. It was sweet and meaningful while still being incredibly sexy *fans self*

So far, I've already read and reread both parts, three times. I love it that much. I love vulnerable, broken Ian and compassionate, comforting Anthony.

Keep up the amazing work! <3 <3 <3

[boredomdelux]

*blushes* one of your favorite fics ever? No way! And I can't believe you read both parts several times, they're so loooong XD I can't believe people's reaction to this, I never thought you'd like it so much X3

And yeah, I also totally have a thing for hurt/comfort. So there X) Possibly more where that came from ;)

Thanks so much for reading<3 BOOP!

[hvnlyumbrlla]

Yep, ever. It's amazing. You deserve every wonderful comment you get because this was breathtaking! Psh, long. I'd read a 300 page fan fiction with our boys in it ;D

Moar? MOAR? Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes I would love that! dsjisdlsa<3

Peace off hun;)<3

[boredomdelux]

300 page Smosh fanfic?! WHERE! :o

We'll see if I can satisfy your need for moar someday, haha XD

Bless your face<3

[arollinggirl]

You..
if I somehow forget half of my memories, I'm blaming this on you.
You and your mind-fucking fanfic.
I've never read something that was so beautiful.. I've read many good smuts before, but none of them showed such true love, passion, and lust.
I am SO happy that this was the first smut fic I've read in a month.. <3.

[boredomdelux]

*looks around all innocent, whistling* pff, I cannot be held responsible for erasing your memories ;)
"I've never read something that was so beautiful.. I've read many good smuts before, but none of them showed such true love, passion, and lust." sheesh, now this line will help me through a long, dark winter<3 Thanks so much for the compliments! :D

[arollinggirl]

LMAO YES YOU ARE RESPONSIBLE DON'T LIE :D!
Aww, np ^^! Just saying the truth though :D

[boredomdelux]

hahahahahaa XD
Thank you so much :)) I can't believe how nice everyone is here!<3

[roxy_rose]

ZOMMGGGG that was firetrucking amazing and soooooooo HOT -brilliantly written too! 10/10

[boredomdelux]

Awww, thankyouthankyouthankyou! :D
So glad you enjoyed it :))

[freshdumbledore]

Okay so now, I guess, I'm finally able to comment this amazing piece of work properly
First,I'm sorry for commenting so late but school is practically eating my free time.
Anyway, after reading that I can't believe two things:That English isn't your first language and that this is your first public fic.How do you do that? I mean English isn't my mother language either but I can't even imagine writing something this beautiful in German...
Your writing style is so amazing and full of details,I think you are probably one of my favorite writers from now on.
Please please write more of our beautiful men(I could never imagine calling Ian ugly)

[boredomdelux]

I totally know what you mean! I have 37 messages in my inbox, I'm leaving for Berlin (oh, your German! Yay! :D) to stay there for a week tomorrow, and I don't know what to do with myself. SO. MUCH. TO. READ. *dies

[freshdumbledore]

Yeah,I mean it' only one week but it's amazing how fast this community is growing!
And I always have to take care not to miss a new chapter of my favorite storys :D

No sorry,your English isn't good,it's AMAZING!
...well,in my opinion as a not-native speaker :D

No,don't feel pressured!Just because I'll always expect artworks like this from you now doesn't mean that I put you under pressure, does it?Just kidding ;) And yes, I got the reference!

Dein Deutsch ist wirklich nicht schlecht!Es würde mich freuen,wenn du bei deiner Deutschland Reise mal bei mir vorbei schauen würdest(auch wenn ich nicht gerade in der Nähe von Berlin wohne :D)Ich find es klasse, dass ihr Norweger Deutsch lernt!Warum können wir nicht norwegisch lernen?Das wäre total toll!

Did you understand that?No,your German isn't amateur-ish at all,I could understand what you wanted to say :D
Unfortunately the only two Norwegian things I can say are "Jeg elsker deg" and "Takk"

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[boredomdelux]

Languages are hard, but I do my best X)

German, dude, the grammar wants to eat me alive! I can never decide on what case (Kasus in german?) to use, and then I get uncertain, and everything inside my head just dies XD Luckily, many of the words are very similar to Norwegian.

And yay, I understood everything you said! :D Too bad you don't live near Berlin, cause it would have been pretty cool to meet you X)

And it's so cool that you know a little Norwegian too! :D Maybe I'll teach everyone some words sometime ;D

[freshdumbledore]

Tell me about it!:D

Haha,yes German grammar is really hard,I feel very sorry for you.Even many native speaker(me including)have problems with the cases(Kasus(or Fall) is right ;))from time to time but I'm sure I would understand you if you talked to me in German.

Yay,see your German doesn't suck at all!I think it would be very cool to talk to someone who actually loves slash as well and writes fanfiction.Maybe I could come to Berlin :D

That would be awesome!If everyone who doesn't live in the US did that, our community would get multilingual :D